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A New Punishment for Susan Author: Mr. Mumei
(Added on Jul 9, 2001) (This month 117521 readers) (Total 199711 readers)
14 year old Susan was used to her step father's evil shenanigans. She knew what torment he was capable of. But she never expected *this*...

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Weighed Average (?): (6.5/10)
Average Rating: (7/10)
Highest Rating: (9/10)
Lowest Rating: (3/10)

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Reviewer: kleintje15 (Edit) Rating: Aug 2, 2004
well i have read better and i have read worse and it seemed like the writer had more to say (6/10)

Reviewer: mkemse (Edit) Rating: Jul 26, 2004
real good story, please add more desicription to the humiliation part, but despite this it is a good story, my type of reading :) (8/10)

Reviewer: littleslut (Edit) Rating: Jun 18, 2004
the story starts well but get's weaker as it goes on not but the humilation aspect's of the story were well written all though altogether not very convincing (5/10)

Reviewer: BDSM_Tourguide (Edit) Rating: Jan 11, 2004
Good story. I like the humiliating aspects of it. I would have liked more description though. (6/10)

Reviewer: ladys_maid (Edit) Rating: May 26, 2003
This really reads to me like a shopping list of punishments. The storyline is not particularly original and the writing is not very well detailed (especially for a good length story like this). It's main problem, though, is that there are just too many implausibles to make it a believeable read. Fundamentally, it is an exciting story, but it's well overdone. (4/10)

Reviewer: ponytara (Edit) Rating: Mar 18, 2002
it's a full-on story, perhaps a little too extreme for my liking. i suspect it's better to over-do the torture though, thus letting readers skim passages that surpass their desires, whereas too little would be unsatisfying for all. (8/10)

Reviewer: jaz (Edit) Rating: Jan 27, 2002
Good story (8/10)

Reviewer: zkay (Edit) Rating: Jan 10, 2002
good story, could be extended with more detail (7/10)

Reviewer: Stefanie (Edit) Rating: Jan 6, 2002
very hot story, it gave me a lot of satisfaction :) ;) (9/10)

Reviewer: watcher69 (Edit) Rating: Oct 12, 2001
Not Enough Detail! There should definetly be more information on each encounter. Another Great concept and good direction but elaborate more. (3/10)

Reviewer: mikeg2 (Edit) Rating: Sep 15, 2001
great (6/10)

Reviewer: SecretWorld (Edit) Rating: Aug 30, 2001
Crazy and extreme, by which I mean absurd. Which is the way I usually like sex stories. Believability is for the dull. 'Susan' is like the little match girl, but nobody is gonna cry, they're gonna wank! (9/10)

Reviewer: Guillaume777 (Edit) Rating: Jul 16, 2001
A good story until Susan and Kim switch place. (7/10)

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