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The Years After World War IV
Author: Sonya Esperanto
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(Added on Mar 7, 2006)
(This month 11046 readers) (Total 19540 readers) |
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Synopsis: The storyline takes place somewhere around the 2050s, where Sweden is the only country left in a post-Apocalyptic Europe. |
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Average (?):  (4.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Razor7826
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Dec 9, 2007 |
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Not as bad as a lot of the reviewers seem to say. While there may be similarities to some other works, I do not believe they are enough to make accusations of plagiarism. All fiction that falls into specific genres will have many similarities to other work, and pinpointing exactly WHICH story of the countless slight variations a person copied off of is nigh impossible.
With that said, the story does have many problems. The punctuation has many errors and there are many unnecessary phrases and words scattered all over the place. A good edit/revision would go a long way towards making the story better. (5/10)
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- Replied by:
Razor7826
(Edit) (Dec 9, 2007)
- Oops, I forgot to say that you really should have more story codes. Not only will it prevent readers from being startled by unwelcome scenes, it will also allow your stories to come up when people are doing site searches, which will increase traffic to your stories and, collaterally, feedback.
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Mar 10, 2007 |
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here we go again (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Mar 8, 2006 |
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Old story, poorly told.
You really, really, really, really need an editor.
Honest! If you ever want your writing to improve, the help of an outsider will assist you. (3/10)
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- Replied by:
sonyaesperanto_15
(Edit) (Mar 8, 2006)
- Some people still like this story. You are just in a minority that doesn't like 'em.
Besides, most people can grasp what goes on in the story.
As for the help of an outsider, let me give you some advice. Why don't you do some WRITING. In other words, put your $ where your mouth is.
I haven't seen you write a single story and all you do is bitch around. I bet you are one of those people that if there is a war, you'd run away or turn QUISLING.
- Replied by:
nikita
(Edit) (Mar 9, 2006)
- Chksng19 HAS written a well received story, in fact, you can find it here, http://www.bdsmlibrary.com/stories/story.php?storyid=3412
As for me, there is nothing I could say about your story that hasn't been said. It takes a lot of effort to write and even more energy to respond in the way you do. You have something to say with your stories, so learn how to say it so people will read it. I hope you take this in the positive way it was meant.
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| Reviewer:
H Dean
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Mar 7, 2006 |
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This story was better than others that I have read from this author. Unfortunately, a good portion of this has been lifted from a series of books called "The Coming of the Horseclans". I don't mind a story based on other people's creations. However, the author failed to acknowledge the obvious similarities between her story and the Robert Adams stories. That is plagurism. (1/10)
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- Replied by:
sonyaesperanto_15
(Edit) (Mar 7, 2006)
- Hi
I have read so much criticisms and hey, this is bdsm so as long there is bdsm, no harm right.
I didn't copy anyone, as I didn't even know who this fucking writer that you mentioned was and yes, I am English. I am just straight forward, which was why none of my past stories were elaborate or clarifying.
I just love comic books and grew up watching tv.
I didn't copy anyone because my basis for this story was based on scholars like Erika Cheetam who talk about future Mongol invasion of Europe.
So go shove it up your ass.
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H Dean
(Edit) (Mar 7, 2006)
- The lead character in the "Horseclans" novels appears to be around 40 years old and learns much about post-apocalyptic changes via radio. Then he leads a band of peoples on horseback to the eventual conquering of most of post-apocalyptic North America. - Your character is around 40 years old and learns of the post-apocalyptic situation in Europe via radio and leads a bunch of horsemen to conquering the lands of Europe.
**This comparison is far too similar and I stand by my belief that the story concept was plagurized.
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| Reviewer:
kemosabe
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Mar 7, 2006 |
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Sorry, but this tale has been told so many times by much more accomplished authors. Without any real conversation, the scenes developed are little more than descriptions of one's fantasies of rape. (4/10)
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jip
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Mar 7, 2006 |
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Strange future for Europe, but ok that is the fiction. The story itself is sexual and exiting. Sometimes cruel but all by all I enjoyed it. (8/10)
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