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Past The Point of Pain
Author: Ann
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(Added on Mar 7, 2006)
(This month 28545 readers) (Total 51040 readers) |
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A Master and His doll do away with a past memory |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jun 25, 2010 |
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Compelling and interesting story. Everything works well, except that the writing style could use some polishing. Too many slightly incomprehensible sentences, which still make sense thanks to the reader seeing the context. But those 'shortcomings' are mostly due to the inexperience the author has. Besides, it's not always easy to put one's thoughts and experiences to paper --hence the use of many a ghostwriter by people wanting to write their memoirs.
Good story, well written.
JJ (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
BeautifulOblivion
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May 26, 2006 |
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Love it. It's very compelling and just great. It's well written and it keeps you intrigued. It's rather mild compared to a lot of the stories on this site, but it's worth the read if you need a calm, romantic D/s story. =) Well done. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Trues_Doll
(Edit) (May 28, 2006)
- Thank you so much for taking the time to not only read my little story but for taking the time to review it, and thank you for such a positive review at that! Master and i both appreciate all who have read and reviewed my writings. ~ann~
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| Reviewer:
kaleun76
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May 20, 2006 |
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From the very beggining you can tell this is not fiction. As such it is exciting, tender, and touching.
On top of that, it is well written.
What more can we ask for? (A lot more actually)
Hope she keeps adding to it (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Trues_Doll
(Edit) (May 20, 2006)
- Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review the story. Yes, i am currently working on the next part, i should be adding it sometime this week. i feel very honored by your kind words, thank you. ~ann~
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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May 11, 2006 |
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Ann, Great Story! I have a slave, whos ex was like Dick. As your story explains, it does take time to break the walls, that have been built. (10/10)
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Trues_Doll
(Edit) (May 16, 2006)
- Thank you! Yes, it does take time, a lot of time to break down all these walls, writing seems to help, so the encouragement i have received here is greatly appreciated.
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| Reviewer:
H Dean
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Mar 8, 2006 |
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A very well written story. The flow was good and the people involved were developed well enough without being over developed. I hope that this author continues this tale. I would enjoy reading about her continuing adventures. One quick word of warning to the reader - this tale is considerably tame when compared to most stories I have read here. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Trues_Doll
(Edit) (May 16, 2006)
- Thank you for your review and also the emails. Master and i do appreciate your support and encouragement.
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Mar 8, 2006 |
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A pretty fair D/s story. Well told and clearly written, it moves along a little slowly in some places.
Overall, quite good! (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Trues_Doll
(Edit) (May 16, 2006)
- Thank you so much for your review. Master and i have appreciated all replies.
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