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A Cruel Tale
Author: Nerval
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(Added on Mar 3, 2006)
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An anonymous abductee is slowly and systematically dehumanized |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
slavediana
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Oct 9, 2010 |
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i love the story. i do so hope you finish it. You have me on the edge wanting to know what happens next! (10/10)
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lacey138
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Feb 8, 2009 |
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a difficult read without an ending. (2/10)
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bmtphoenix
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Oct 12, 2007 |
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Aw man, where's the rest of it? Sucks that you didn't keep going...update and I'll up my rating...only rating it so low because it looks like it has no ending. (5/10)
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pet252r
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Feb 18, 2007 |
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i liked it, please do it again (7/10)
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littleone_
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Jun 1, 2006 |
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Great from the first sentence. The first three chapers left me wanting more. I hope Nerval quickly follows up. The stroy is great and I so totally feel the captives pain. I suffer right along with her and enjoy every moment of it. (9/10)
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Aussiegirl1
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Apr 7, 2006 |
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Very well done. I certainly am looking forward to more and wondering what is in store for the poor girl next.
Aussiegirl (10/10)
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H Dean
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Apr 6, 2006 |
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Quite a good story, as of chapter three. The flow was well kept, descriptions vivid enough and the victim's sense of helplessness well illustrated. Further, it was erotic and well thought. The few flaws in the story do not, in any way, detract from the story or its flow. I look forward to future installments. (8/10)
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sylvia_ber
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Mar 18, 2006 |
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A great story. You are cruel to us, please post a new chapter soon :) (9/10)
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heycarrieanne
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Mar 6, 2006 |
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A very excellent story! I can't wait to see where you are going with it. (8/10)
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vlad33
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Mar 5, 2006 |
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excellent looking forward to next chapters. (10/10)
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JimmyJump
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Mar 5, 2006 |
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Excellent beginning to a more than promising story. Well written with a showing of a wide vocabulary, which prevents the so often repetitiveness of words.
What makes this introduction to the story stand out above equally themed writings, is the very well executed victim's point of view, which provides the reader with just enough detail to keep it interesting and to understand what is going on... Very well worth the read.
In other words: great stuff!
Oh, just to exclude confusion among some reviewers: the start of a story is where the first word of the text is situated, the end is where you see the dot after the final word of said text (wink-wink).
JJ (10/10)
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puppyjen
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Mar 4, 2006 |
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Very good story. Well thought out and nice clear discriptions. (9/10)
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Dick the Slaver
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Mar 4, 2006 |
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it is a very good story easy to follow. Hope to have more chapters in the future. (9/10)
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jip
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Mar 4, 2006 |
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No start and no end. Quite difficult to follow. (4/10)
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chksng19
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Mar 4, 2006 |
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An excellently written twist on the old tale. Strong descriptions and clear word pictures make this one to point to as a fine example of the genre (9/10)
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