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A Little Shopping
Author: Kev
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(Added on Mar 1, 2006)
(This month 39419 readers) (Total 52077 readers) |
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A male customer visits a teen boutique to do a little shopping around of his own but it\'s not clothes he\'s looking for...... |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Kev
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Mar 2, 2006 |
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Ok, there have been a mix up. this story isn't written by me at all. This will be sorted out shortly I hope so hold your comments for the right owner.
Thanks (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Mar 1, 2006 |
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A short start for the tale, but there is potential. Looking for the next chapter to raise the score. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
tom03087
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Mar 1, 2006 |
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to small a story line for first installment (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Mar 1, 2006 |
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the one thing that i realy liked about this story was that even tho it involved tean agers the most common subject ourside of women who are blackmailed is that the story was original not your typical school surrounding and all (8/10)
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