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Auctioned Wives
Author: Karen Kay
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(Added on Feb 20, 2006)
(This month 92730 readers) (Total 148720 readers) |
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Housewives are selected and auctioned off to become participants for a new reality tv show of the future. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
bingb
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Jun 7, 2006 |
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Too long,not enough real content. (4/10)
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donkotts
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May 17, 2006 |
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Very erotic! (10/10)
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traveler118
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Mar 25, 2006 |
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The wrong words and typos detracted from a very exciting story line. I look forward to reading about the other contestants as they each make progress. Some long protracted physical bondage would be interesting. The studs could extend themselves by taking total care of each contestant in their bound state including feeding them, bathing them, brushing their hair, cleaning their teeth, cleaning their nose, taking charge of their toilet functions, shaving everything as needed. Each contestant would have to continue to request each action in great detail before it would be done or it would not be done. When in bondage, they would have to request a diaper if needed or physically placed on the toilet after which their stud would clean them up. Each of them would become totally dependent on their stud for everything. Imagine what would go through their minds as they had to give up every private, personal, and intimate care to someone else . . . and at their constant request. Perhaps as more episodes are added, the existing text can also be corrected. (9/10)
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chksng19
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Mar 21, 2006 |
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A good story line, but lots of spell-checker errors to distract (wrong words). Fun ideas, and a neat concept. Looking forward to more. (7/10)
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kemosabe
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Feb 25, 2006 |
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Must be every woman's fantasy. Seemed a little juvenile in the dialogue but the premise is most interesting. I'd like to see a little BDSM thrown into the mix. (7/10)
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newwmember
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Feb 24, 2006 |
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Congratulations for this story, I like this one as the facts seem to happen in a realistic surrounding and the coercion is plausible, too. Please continue writing (9/10)
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woolfighter
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Feb 23, 2006 |
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The starters are good, I just hope you'll be able to keep this level in next chapters. (8/10)
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Gypsy
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Feb 21, 2006 |
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The story makes the anticipation build. It makes me want to read more chapters. Looking forward to more. (9/10)
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Rocky
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Feb 21, 2006 |
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Decent concept, but too much of the dialogue seemed stilted and forced. I'd suggest writing like people actually talk, which isn't always with proper grammar or in complete sentences. (7/10)
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drzyzga
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Feb 21, 2006 |
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more pressure to the girls will get a better result. I think there will be more chapters. There you can show what will happen if a girl doesnt reach the next level. The contract gives manny possebillities.
Do it as you like. It will be great.
Excuse my english 1 am an german. (9/10)
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Dreamer
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Feb 21, 2006 |
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I love the story and can't wait to read more episodes.
For me, it moved a little too fast in places, so unlike one reviewer, I'd like it to be dragged out a little more.
Another reviewer has complained that it is a little "too realistic".
WOW ! For me, the greater the realism, the better and more enjoyable the story ! (8/10)
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chooky_104
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Feb 21, 2006 |
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Basic writing, but I like the story line a lot. Cant wait to read more, just hope it doesn't drag on too much. (7/10)
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mkemse
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Feb 20, 2006 |
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the story was good, just to to realistic but it was fun to read (7/10)
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