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Wifes interrogation
Author: ralph
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(Added on Feb 20, 2006)
(This month 74069 readers) (Total 133792 readers) |
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A wife is sold for an horrific film |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Mothbrad
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Dec 20, 2006 |
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This story - a well crafted interrogation tale (which if you haven't noticed, I tend to favour) - if it was ever continued/completed, would no doubt be worth a 9 or maybe a 10, but it looks like it's been abandoned. If you're still reading this, Ralph, do what you can to get this story back on the road! (7/10)
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chksng19
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Jun 10, 2006 |
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Pretty good story. What happens next? (8/10)
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whpike
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Apr 30, 2006 |
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you have a unique writing style. I'm looking foward to future updates on this one, as well as anything new you may come up with.
just curious, are you going to write more of this? (10/10)
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La Toya
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Mar 1, 2006 |
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I knew it was worth waiting for the second chapter. My only problem is the chapters are two short. (8/10)
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LordVetinari
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Mar 1, 2006 |
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Interesting ideas, and great hints for the future. Now let's see the action. (9/10)
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jip
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Feb 28, 2006 |
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It became just more interesting and it stops.. when the follow up ? (8/10)
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mkemse
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Feb 27, 2006 |
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my be the oddest review i have ever done, by no means my type of story, but i enjoyed it anyway (9/10)
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kemosabe
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Feb 25, 2006 |
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I was a little surprised at the abrupt ending of the first chapter. It seemed to be just short of becoming erotic. Maybe the next addition will do more to whet my appetite. (7/10)
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masterbw
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Feb 24, 2006 |
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Anxious to read more. I'm a husband of course and we are into these things for some reason. :) (9/10)
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JimmyJump
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Feb 23, 2006 |
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Very nice indeed... A promising start to a story that has a good pace and is very well narrated, without the so often occuring hastiness, when all is very well structured in the mind of the writer but doesn't come across on paper, as we, the readers, cannot see inside the writer's head (the two-way mirrored mind would be a nice invention).
Am looking forward to the next installment.
'Ralph' is yet another name I can add to my 'to follow' list of good writers...
Well done.
JJ (9/10)
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carrie
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Feb 22, 2006 |
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Excellent! Can't wait to read the next chapter. (9/10)
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rizzini
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Feb 22, 2006 |
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Good start. But I am waiting for the rest. (8/10)
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castle2001
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Feb 22, 2006 |
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good starting chapter. Please continue (9/10)
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Dick the Slaver
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Feb 21, 2006 |
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A very good start. I hope to read more chapters in the near future. (9/10)
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Foxysake
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Feb 21, 2006 |
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I too must agree, this is a very favorable start, I hope you post a contiuation part soon! (9/10)
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heycarrieanne
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Feb 20, 2006 |
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A very good beginning and I look forward to reading more. While I find the fantasy of a husband watching others use his wife extremely hot, I wonder what men get out of it? Oh, and I especially enjoyed the lack of typos and the good grammar!! (9/10)
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