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You Want Me To Do What?
Author: Alfamann
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(Added on Feb 17, 2006)
(This month 20864 readers) (Total 47729 readers) |
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Allan seizes the opportunity to introduce 42yo Betty to the world of spanking and bondage she had so long fantisized about |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
tbear4759
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May 13, 2007 |
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an enjoyable story (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Lisa Jones
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May 20, 2006 |
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I loved this one. Superbly written, believable characters, and very, very erotic. Is there any more to come please? (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Alfamann
(Edit) (May 20, 2006)
- Hi Lisa
Thanks for feedback. Glad you enjoyed it. I do intend to finish this story off although it will not be for another few months as I am lucky enough to currently be holidaying in Europe
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| Reviewer:
traveler118
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May 2, 2006 |
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I enjoyed this story. It had a nice development of each character so that we got a little into their minds and understood their great attraction for each other along with their personal, well matched needs for which each satisfied the other. Good balance. No violence for violences sake. Additional chapters expanding their blossoming relationship would be interesting as long as each continues to care for the other. (9/10)
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chksng19
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Feb 21, 2006 |
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An excellent story, well written and believable as being a record of a real event, rather than just fantasy. Congrats!
I'd love to see more of the same. This is powerful, quality writing. (10/10)
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rainbow001
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Feb 18, 2006 |
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Very nice story, well written and erotic please continue. Hope to add to Betty's humiliation soon... (9/10)
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jip
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Feb 18, 2006 |
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Simply great! Erotic, right level of sex, pain etc. hope there will be another part, as the subject leaves a way open of possibilities.
.. could not give more than a 10! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
bigcat
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Feb 17, 2006 |
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That is one terrific piece of writing. So well done. Great buildup, wonderful tension. I personally love the consensual aspect of it. Characters and situation very realistic, not soaring off into wild fantasy. Eagerly await more of their adventures. (10/10)
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Serenaofthenight
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Feb 17, 2006 |
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Greatly enjoyed the loss of innocence of both parties - hoping to hear more of their escapades! (9/10)
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mkemse
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Feb 17, 2006 |
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great story just wish it was NC rather then consensual (9/10)
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