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    | Jack\'s Submission
    
    Author: Masterinc |   
    |  | (Added on Feb 6, 2006)
            (This month 56953 readers) (Total 77507 readers) |   
    |  | The story of how Jack Short became his wife\'s sub and sex toy. |  
 
   
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      Average (?):  (7.5/10) |   
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      Rating:  (8.5/10) |   
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      Rating:  (9/10) |   
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    | Reviewer: 
    mkemse
  (Edit) | Rating:  | Feb 22, 2006 |   
    |  | altho i am not into Femdom, nice to see a story from a female point of view rather then a man's just for a cge, i still prefer maledom, but it was a good story (8/10) 
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    bdsmbill
  (Edit) | Rating:  | Feb 15, 2006 |   
    |  | Good story, and the spread leg rail device was diabolical. (8/10) 
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    | Reviewer: 
    DungeonMaster6
  (Edit) | Rating:  | Feb 11, 2006 |   
    |  | The concept is excellent and the detailing of the punishments were well thought out. I didn't notice too many typos, although with a story that long, there are bound to be some. The length of the story had me speed reading through some of it, which is probably my only complaint. (9/10) 
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