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Houseboat
Author: Gypsy
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(Added on Feb 5, 2006)
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Husband gets his young wife to perform his fantasy and desires |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Bearsie
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Aug 15, 2011 |
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The story is easy to like and could certainly be developed further. (9/10)
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GreenEyedFemme
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Jun 18, 2010 |
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Typos and trite lines, but it's got potential. I hope the author continues the story. (6/10)
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easysue
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Feb 14, 2006 |
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Very good so far but needs some anal (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
sylvia_ber
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Feb 9, 2006 |
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A wonderfull story. Well written. I want to read more :) (8/10)
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Maestropretoriano
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Feb 7, 2006 |
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A very interesting first chapter, written with a nice rythm and veary easy to read. I will wait for the next chapters to follow her trainning. (8/10)
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H Dean
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Feb 6, 2006 |
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Interesting story, though I am not certain you succeeded in completely selling the premise. It seems a bit too easy. I will stick around for future chapters and see if I start to buy it more. (7/10)
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tomupstateny
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Feb 6, 2006 |
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great story I liked it very much can not wait to read more keep up the good work (9/10)
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chksng19
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Feb 6, 2006 |
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Fine start, well constructed and written. Interesting premise; waiting for more. (8/10)
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mkemse
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Feb 5, 2006 |
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very well done, hope there is more to cum (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Gypsy
(Edit) (Feb 8, 2006)
- I am very happy that you enjoyed the first chapter. There are four chapters, total and I hope they meet with the same approval you gave chapter one. I'll do my best to please you. Gypsy
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Feb 5, 2006 |
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Gypsy, This was a great first chapter, I look forward to reading more. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Gypsy
(Edit) (Feb 8, 2006)
- Thanks La Toya. Houseboat has four chapters and so far I have submitted three. I'm working on the last one now. I appreciate your review and it has encouraged me greatly to continue with my writting. Thanks again Gypsy
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