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Rape Me
Author: Nikki Pegram
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(Added on Feb 2, 2006)
(This month 50680 readers) (Total 66452 readers) |
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When trying to help a friend goes wrong |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Apr 30, 2006 |
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not bad at all for a first attempt, hope you do more (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Foxysake
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Feb 4, 2006 |
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Nice job. You have an interesting story plot though the ending lacked some. I hope you plan on continuing to write more stories. (7/10)
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laursie
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Feb 3, 2006 |
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Good first story. Lacked a little in the depth department but interesting none the less. I look forward to reading more from you. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Feb 3, 2006 |
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Mechanically, not a bad story. Plotwise, I see the need for some growth here: the "world" you use is not described. Relationships between characters are undefined. Breaking a wrist? All her damage and not going for medical help? All his damage and still able to go on? Not sure it's realistic.
I think you have good ability; hope you'll try again. (5/10)
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