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Rachel the High-School Student
Author: Dark Avenger
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(Added on Jan 31, 2006)
(This month 70170 readers) (Total 96887 readers) |
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Rachel, a young teenage beauty, is raped orally and vaginally, masturbated against her will and made to orgasm by a stranger in her own house, and filmed throughout her ordeal. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Michael Fuhs
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Feb 2, 2006 |
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A phantasy stimulating story, Iīm really looking forward to learn more about this poor girlīs lot. (8/10)
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Arcege
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Feb 2, 2006 |
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Very enjoyable. Good development, nice narrative. Nice plot points - killing the bear, girl running to the window to scream. I hope it continues. Personally, I'd like to see a good deal of abject humiliation of the poor girl; but that's just me. :) (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dododecapod
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Feb 1, 2006 |
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I enjoyed this. You've written a terse, spare narrative with just enough description to sketch in the main character and the feelings of her assailant. I also like the relative realism of the piece, with little drift into fantasy or wish-fulfilment dreams.
One small point - you could have used more variety in your descriptors, it seemed some were re-used a little often.
All in all, a very nice piece. I'll look forward to the continuation. (8/10)
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La Toya
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Feb 1, 2006 |
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Not a bad story. (9/10)
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jip
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Feb 1, 2006 |
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good sexy story. (9/10)
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mkemse
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Feb 1, 2006 |
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love your stories (9/10)
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