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Rachel\'s Reform
Author: A Turtle
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(Added on Jan 30, 2006)
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Grown up daughter Rachel gets too big for her boots and is sent to stay with a very strict Aunt to learn how to behave |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
timetrax
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Feb 4, 2012 |
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I enjoyed this story a lot, and liked the way a drink problem has revealed Rachel's latent sex drive, and submissiveness. (7/10)
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JimmyJump
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Jan 30, 2009 |
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Story has promise. But it seems it won't get past that stage.
Only letdowns are the distrustfulness and disdain of the parents. They could have been painted as being more realisticly understanding, without having to change the outcome of the tale.
Other letdown is that we (or Rachel) is thrown in at the deep end, so to speak. A slower build-up would have been great. The scene in the train, although highly erotic, was completely redundant, merely used as an interlude...
Still, I'm hoping there will be a follow-up chapter, one day.
JJ (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
bigcat
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Feb 7, 2006 |
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Liked it a lot. Gave it a high rating as its humiliation and exhibition aspects hold a great deal of promise. Looking forward to the updates. (9/10)
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Ironwulf
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Feb 7, 2006 |
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Chapter One was ok at best, but with Chapter Two the story and style of writing is really beginning to find its way. Wanted to give it a higher rating but couldn't with only two chapters written. Looking forward to more along the style of Chapter Two as this story continues. I think this could become a top 50 story. (8/10)
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chksng19
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Feb 7, 2006 |
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A fair start for a story, with much hope for further chapters. The beginning moved really slowly, though; might want to pick up the pace a little should you rewrite it or choose to post it elsewhere in the future. (7/10)
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mkemse
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Jan 31, 2006 |
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i need bit more to go on to make an honest review, will redo after your nxt chapter is posted, i like what i have read so far (7/10)
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