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Weighed
Average (?):  (3.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Jan 19, 2012 |
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Not bad this story. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 31, 2006 |
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was marginaly acceptable, i might suggst you get help with the english langue before your next post to make it readable, or a one fellow review suggested, do the storyin your native langue, they have posted stories other then in english here (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
bdanials
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Jan 30, 2006 |
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I agree with chksng19, an editor might be able to help you smooth the story and fix the errors.
I do think you have the beginnings of a good author. Keep on writing. With a bit more practice and also a little help from an editor you will do well. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Jan 29, 2006 |
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Absolutely cutting edge porn if written only for an Indian audience, as the moral standards are much different there.
In the West, however, the story doesn't work. An editor might be able to help you smooth the story and fix the errors. As it stands, the story is poor at best. (2/10)
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- Replied by:
Masala
(Edit) (Jan 29, 2006)
- I'm sorry if u didnt like the story. I'm not a writer and hadn't considered the international readers before posting. Plus I couldn't get anyone to help me out so I posted as it is. I wrote it when I was feeling horny. I have read so many good stories here that I felt I'd contribute in some way.
Sorry Again.
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| Reviewer:
elsefine
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Jan 28, 2006 |
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barely readable. Might be good if written in author's native language (1/10)
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