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Hotel room D/s
Author: Ecthelion
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(Added on Jan 11, 2006)
(This month 51095 readers) (Total 59683 readers) |
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A sub visits her Master in a hotel room |
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Weighed
Average (?): (6.5/10) |
Average
Rating: (7/10) |
Highest
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Lowest
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Reviewer:
bracemaiden
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Feb 8, 2006 |
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Your sentence structure of "I (action) your (body part) was so monotonous as to distract me from reading. Mixing it up a bit, like common conversation is, will really help. (6/10)
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Reviewer:
PleasureSlave
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Jan 28, 2006 |
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Lovely sequence of events--would love to try it! Could use a bit more characterization on the part of the Dom. Delightful stuff! (8/10)
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Reviewer:
Breathless
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Jan 18, 2006 |
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I enjoyed this story immensely! Not a huge fan of the first person format, but your descriptions and various approaches were so hot that it was still a winner for me. By not having much in the way of any character development or descriptions, I was able to project myself into the "you" position. Makes me want to meet the writer at this hotel. (8/10)
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Reviewer:
C_Lakewood
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Jan 16, 2006 |
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If you want all mindless action, you'll probably like this story. I didn't. Who are these people? What are their thoughts? Motivations? How did they come to this? The writing was clean enough, but the effect was very unsatisfying. (5/10)
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