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Happiness
Author: Zebulon
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(Added on Dec 29, 2005)
(This month 50682 readers) (Total 67523 readers) |
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A young wife only wants to make her new husband happy. So she turns to his old girlfriend for help and gets more than she bargined for. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Elkor
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Jan 14, 2006 |
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The story was very well, written, but I thought the plot twist at the end was rather sudden and didn't fit well with the beginning of the story. I think it would have been more enjoyable without the twist, if things had stayed "in the house" as it were. (8/10)
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laursie
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Jan 5, 2006 |
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What a twist. Loved the ending. I hope there will be more to this story. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Malice
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Jan 4, 2006 |
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I stayed in my thoughts long after I read it, It left me wanting more, more detail, more chapters, and at very least.. to see the old girl friend to cum before it trailed off!
It was very good though, enjoyable. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
heycarrieanne
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Jan 2, 2006 |
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An excellent story, very well written, with quite the surprising ending. I can't wait to read the next installment! (9/10)
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