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Housewife rape
Author: Red Doggie
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(Added on Dec 23, 2005)
(This month 100830 readers) (Total 194768 readers) |
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a lady gets raped by gang members and then her friends are unlucky enough to be taken by the gang too. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (6/10) |
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| Reviewer:
egore
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Apr 10, 2006 |
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hope there is more comming! (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Marsdefender
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Apr 5, 2006 |
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I love the story. STILL WAITING FOR CONTinue... RED DOGGIE PLZ ANSWER! (8/10)
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- Replied by:
red doggie
(Edit) (Apr 5, 2006)
- Thanks. As a matter of fact I just sent chapter 2 in a few days ago. It didn't make the April 4 update so I guess it will be in the next one.
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| Reviewer:
dratt1959
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Feb 17, 2006 |
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Awsome story looking forward to part 2. Any idea when it might be ready (7/10)
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- Replied by:
red doggie
(Edit) (Feb 17, 2006)
- Hopefully very soon. I'm about 75% done with the next part. I hope to get the time to finish it in a bit.
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| Reviewer:
billemmons
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Jan 5, 2006 |
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Love the story and keep up the good work (10/10)
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sheilagirl
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Jan 5, 2006 |
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I didn't see the original script that apparently was poorly written so I will comment only on what I did read. Especially since one of the protagonists shares my name I found it rather scary, but it comes out as well written now and quite powerful. I love freedom of expression and hate censorship so I think this work belongs here for our readers to enjoy even if it makes them squirm a bit. Of course I hope the reality never happens and this is not representative of typical attitudes of blacks toward whites. Still it makes me wonder. How many people would want to do that to me if they had a chance? (8/10)
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- Replied by:
red doggie
(Edit) (Jan 5, 2006)
- Thanks. I like this type of story and I tried to make it realistic without going to over the top with it. I hope to have part 2 done soon but it takes me forever to get it the way I want. Rewrites, rewrites. Thanks for the input.
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| Reviewer:
bdsmbill
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Jan 4, 2006 |
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Well, the paragraphs are pretty well fixed up, and the story wasn't bad at all. It is a little over the top for my personal taste, but YMMV. Good job reformatting it. (7/10)
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LordLaraby
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Dec 30, 2005 |
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Where are the paragraphs? I can't read a jumble of words in a long continuous stream.
The story might actually be good to read. Resubmit at after making readable. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
Mad_Splitter
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Dec 29, 2005 |
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Hard to read till reformated but an excellent start (9/10)
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chksng19
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Dec 29, 2005 |
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Well, you know what? This could be a script for things happening in big cities around the world every day. Very real and somewhat convincing.
Concerns lie in the story being so hard to read. Lots of concerns. (4/10)
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- Replied by:
red doggie
(Edit) (Dec 29, 2005)
- Thanks. I just reformatted the story so I hope it will be easier to read when it gets posted here. Maybe you'll like it better.
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| Reviewer:
slavejack
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Dec 28, 2005 |
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i hope there is more coming. especially with the husband. total humiliation and slavery of the white man and his family. hot. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Dec 28, 2005 |
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No paragraphs? The story could be the greastest in the world, but not the way it's written (3/10)
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ramses
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Dec 28, 2005 |
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I didn't really mind the lack of paragraphs, though they would be handy. I hope you will find the time to add some paragraph marks.
Some very nice rape scenes. Promising ending. Don't add to many characters, it makes it harder to follow the story-line. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
newguru
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Dec 27, 2005 |
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Too hard to read.... (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
heycarrieanne
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Dec 26, 2005 |
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Are kidding me? This is impossible to even read! It does NO good to have a great theme for a story when you have no paragraphs or even use proper punctuation. Perhaps you should remove this story, re-do it, then resubmit it so that readers can enjoy it. (1/10)
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- Replied by:
red doggie
(Edit) (Dec 29, 2005)
- I just sent the reformatted story in. Please read it again and see how you like it then. This message is for you and all the readers who were nice enough to review the story. Thanks all.
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Dec 26, 2005 |
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you need to make paragraphs, if you redo this i will re review it like the idea and theme just oo hard to read (4/10)
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