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Aliquis\' mistake
Author: Aliquis
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(Added on Dec 9, 2005)
(This month 19272 readers) (Total 38405 readers) |
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A young guy wants to prove his innocence to a modern inquisition, so he gives himself up for questioning. We he is taken to the torture chamber he soon relizes that he had made a huge mistake. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Anneya
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Jun 11, 2006 |
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Very enjoyable, thanks. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Feb 2, 2006 |
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interesting story, sometimes a little exagerated, but ok it ios a story after all. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Travis
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Dec 23, 2005 |
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Good rendition of a personal fantasy. The dialogue was a little trite. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
nikita
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Dec 11, 2005 |
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The writer created a story thick with tension. At various points in the story, it feels like I'm reading the unholy confession of a painslut.
My favorite line, "Fear is a most talented torturer." (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Aliquis
(Edit) (Dec 12, 2005)
- Thanks a lot, nikita!
You are right. The very core of my dreams is written in the story
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| Reviewer:
David Taylor
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Dec 11, 2005 |
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Terrific story. I'm looking forward to the next (hopefully many) installments. Please don't just have the young woman torture him. Throw in a few men of various ages - perhaps the girl's brother among them. Just a suggestion - I'm sure I'll love whatever you choose. Let's have many more stories of the same style. I particularly enjoy the extreme torture but without permanent effects. Thanks for this. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
vlk16
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Dec 11, 2005 |
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Extraordinary! (10/10)
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