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Joe is trained as a doggy-slave
Author: 2nn
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(Added on Nov 13, 2005)
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Joe's master trains him as a doggy-slave and takes him to a brutal gangbanging session. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Luvr
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Aug 28, 2011 |
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I'm not sure how I've missed this story, but I'm glad I found it! I would love to read more about this pair.
Thank you for your stories and your amazingly warped mind. :)
Also, would love to see a story that deals with breathplay being used to purposefully, slowly, dissolve a slave's mind, perhaps the slave fighting against it. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
beastmaster
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Nov 21, 2005 |
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given that it is a subn-homo-sadistic story and not my thing i was amazed at how much i enjoyed it.
i was quite able to suspend who, what and why and just let it all flow over me, pun not intended. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
schneelocke
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Nov 19, 2005 |
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It was OK, overall. Let's see:
Plot: OK, if slightly unrealistic at times - you just couldn't expect random people on the street to be fine with taking out a dog slave, but it's a fantasy, so that's certainly forgiveable. :)
Characters: could be fleshed out more. There is pretty much no background information; in fact, the Master is not even given a name, and you don't learn anything about what motivates the characters, how they met, why they are interested in BDSM, how their relationship formed, and all that. Maybe something to elaborate on in a future prequel?
Visual descriptions: good. There could've some more detail, but I guess that's more a matter of personal taste than anything else. :)
Overall, I liked it, even though it's not my favourite story; I'm looking forward to the next part, too. To the author: keep it up. :)
(6/10)
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