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The Honeymoon Is Over
Author: Connie Miller
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(Added on Jun 24, 2001)
(This month 51646 readers) (Total 59981 readers) |
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Husband comes home from work and his wife has been lazy and hasn't cleaned the house and she gets the punishment she deserves. |
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Average (?):  (4/10) |
Average
Rating:  (3.5/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
crickette
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Aug 2, 2005 |
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Not bad. The plot of the story was good. The flow of the story, however was not smooth. Some parts seemed to fit together but others seemed like they were placed in that particular part of the story just because you felt the story had to have it because most of the other stories on the site did. There were a few grammatical errors, nothing major. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Mar 10, 2005 |
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this one was just ok (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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May 1, 2004 |
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the story offers nothing, a 2 rating is even generous (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
ladys_maid
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May 19, 2003 |
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This is pretty turgid stuff. The writer seems to struggle to string together a sentence of more than a few words, which is irritating. The story itself is uninspired and has been told countless times before (mostly in a better way than this). (2/10)
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