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Strong Arm Of The Law
Author: Ashtree
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(Added on Oct 28, 2005)
(This month 54142 readers) (Total 74153 readers) |
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A shoplifter falls into the hands of a kinky Policewoman |
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| Reviewer:
Blackbird
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Dec 10, 2005 |
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I definitely enjoyed it because of the focus on the emotions of the characters. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Oct 30, 2005 |
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to typical of teem age stories posted, always humiliated. blackmailed ect. i did not find anything real different in this post (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dododecapod
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Oct 29, 2005 |
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I found this very sexy and hot, but perhaps a little short, and with insufficient description and expression. The end result is that it feels rushed, too swift, and under punctuated, despite there being no actual instance of such. Greater description and exposition would be good.
However, your writing is clear and concise, and your diting is excellent. A good tale, reasonably well told. (7/10)
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