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Desert Bound
Author: Silky Sullivan
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(Added on Oct 28, 2005)
(This month 10172 readers) (Total 33036 readers) |
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College girl on her way back to school in the fall and has car trouble in the desert. She encounters a "Good Samaritan" who turns out not to be so good after all. |
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Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Sabrina
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Mar 25, 2006 |
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A nice plot was over-simplified and lacked details and descriptions that were just begging to be told, but it had its moments and on the whole, I liked it. Keep up the good work and you will certainly improve in style and content. A qualified "Well done" from me ~ for what that is worth ~ LOL. (5/10)
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Mad Lews
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Oct 31, 2005 |
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Not the smoothest presentation of a somewhat familiar story line. Still it had it's moments and with a little practice I'm sure you'll get better at the writing end of it, the story telling is just fine. (7/10)
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mkemse
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Oct 30, 2005 |
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the paragraphs are WAY to long, and made it almost impossible to read and follow, please reformat the paragraphs (5/10)
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