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An Evening with the Anderson's
Author: The Chairman
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(Added on Oct 28, 2005)
(This month 22068 readers) (Total 66213 readers) |
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Alan takes his slave wife Betty for an evening-long session of pain and torture at the hands of Master Anderson. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
kicksnf
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Jun 15, 2011 |
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SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !!! SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !!! SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !!! SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !!! SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !!! SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !!! SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !!! SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !!! SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !!! SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !!! SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !! (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
PascalP
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Jan 4, 2006 |
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I like the way we only hear bitti's screams and moans. We're waiting with her first, after with the husband. It gives a touch of eroticism in the tale. Well, rude Eros.
After that, I'd like to know how the heroine ''enjoyed'' this first time. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
TheChairman
(Edit) (Jan 8, 2006)
- THank you so much for your kind review. Knowing that others enjoy my work is what encourages me to continue sharing it. As for bitty's reactions, I have plans to return to these characters again, when I have some free time.
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| Reviewer:
RaeSeven
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Dec 11, 2005 |
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Good details. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
TheChairman
(Edit) (Dec 11, 2005)
- Thank you for your kind words. They are much appreciated.
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| Reviewer:
house of cadmus
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Nov 7, 2005 |
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A fantastic short story, wel written and a great twist. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
TheChairman
(Edit) (Nov 7, 2005)
- I am glad you liked it, and were at least somewhat surprised at the ending. <g> I hope you will sometimes find something to enjoy in my future works as well.
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| Reviewer:
kaleun76
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Oct 30, 2005 |
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Very well written. Dark, submissive and intriguing.
Of course we know need a "prequel" on tightcunt's termination, and a couple of sequels on bitty's (short I'm sure) future life, and the travails of suckslut and juggy. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
TheChairman
(Edit) (Oct 30, 2005)
- I thank you for your kind words. I hadn't considered a prequel, but do have ideas on what I would like to do for sequels. As a f'rinstance, bitty actually has a rather precisely determined number of years of additional life remaining, but the details will have to wait. <g>
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| Reviewer:
Jill Bird
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Oct 30, 2005 |
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i enjoyed this story. its mix of sentimentallity and brutality pleased me.
i felt however that it owed rather too much to \"the story of O\" and other similar slave stories. i think that we need to get away from the stilted cliches of \"you will address me as Master\" and so on to a more modern use of language.
but i would like to know what happens to her later on. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
TheChairman
(Edit) (Oct 30, 2005)
- The use of language was a deliberate part of the characterisation I was aiming for. As for the rest, Newton put it best when he said, "If I have seen farther than others, it is because I have stood on the shoulders of giants." While I in no way compare myself in any way, shape, or form to the greats, I must acknowledge the debt I owe them, and if my work seems derivative, my apologies.
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| Reviewer:
Dododecapod
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Oct 29, 2005 |
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This is indeed quite different from what I know of your usual pieces - which is mostly Dolcett-style tales.
I, for one, call it an improvement. This has the darkness of nightmare, the dark eros of a shadowplay and the sexual fire of the best erotic fantasy.
Your choice to imply, infer and only secondhand to describe the torments of bitty/Betty is inspired, allowing the readers fantasies/fears to feed upon themselves. Exceptionally well done.
Your writing is as superb as I expected, and complements your storytelling well. I was most impressed. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
TheChairman
(Edit) (Oct 30, 2005)
- I know you don't care for Dolcett-style stuff, and "de gustibus non disputandum", at least when it comes to plotlines. But I am delighted that you liked this story. Yes, I definitely was trying to keep all the darkness "off-stage", for exactly the reasons you noted. So I thank you deeply for your kind words, but will warn you that future stories will vary, from more Dolcett-tales to more like this. As the saying goes, "Ya pays your money, ya takes your chances", only here you get them for free. :-)
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