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Punished by Parents in Law Author: Alfamann
(Added on Oct 17, 2005) (This month 186890 readers) (Total 274535 readers)
Kym submits to humiliation and punishment by her Parents in Law in her desire to overcome her shortcomings, and be the perfect Daughter in Law

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Reviewer: girlyboy46 (Edit) Rating: Feb 11, 2015
Great humiliation story one of the best that I can remember reading
Well done Alfaman (9/10)

Reviewer: JimmyJump (Edit) Rating: Feb 7, 2009
The punishment and humiliation parts are well done, as are the dialogues between the different folks. But the parts that are used to knit the story together, seem out of touch with the story, like they were added later to give the tale more allure, more body.
Also, the premise used to get to the enduring punishment, seems a tad thin. Daughter-in-law goes for a night on the town (nothing wrong here), gets drunk (okay, that happens), is harassed by two slicks who want to take advantage of a drunk woman (bastards, really) and subsequently are going to rape her (so, Kym's a victim, right?). Out of nothing and oh-so conveniently, appears Kym's daddy-in-law, and instead of soothing the woman after her almost rape, he sets in motion her degradation through humiliation and punishment. Seems a tad over it, don't you think?
Nevertheless, I thoroughly enjoyed the story, regardless of the minor flaws left and right, so, what the hell am I complaining about anyway...
JJ (9/10)

Reviewer: non-writer (Edit) Rating: Oct 27, 2006
One of the best stories I've read. The parent-in-laws is an unusual idea but works well. I liked the story was told from the victims standpoint. (10/10)

Reviewer: quincy451 (Edit) Rating: Jun 30, 2006
Yes like one other review here the cop bit in chapter 12 left me stopping right before it started but what came after made up for it and got me back into the story. I just wish some of the last scenes would have been longer and more detailed. I mean the setup was great, the experienced painslut at this point, the man who should take more than either of the girls and the whimpy girl who is not expected to take much. Then bam it is over in one paragraph.
But yes I liked the humiliation very much throughout. The spanking from the group was great, where she went from person to person and finally to the 18 year old boy who creams his pants spanking her. That was some of the best parts of the story. (10/10)

Reviewer: yunyu723 (Edit) Rating: May 7, 2006
the best story i ever read. thank you . (9/10)

Reviewer: chksng19 (Edit) Rating: May 5, 2006
An exciting humil story, with plenty of bottom squirming on the part of our heroine.
Well written and holds one's attention well. (9/10)

Reviewer: MIKEY100 (Edit) Rating: Feb 13, 2006
Delicious humiliation. Not many writers seem to achieve that level. Well done. I hope there is more to come. What about Meg and Amy? (9/10)
Replied by: Alfamann (Edit) (Feb 14, 2006)
Hi
Thanks for feedback. Glad you are enjoying the story. I have thought of adding to Meg & Amy stories but always seem to be working on something else. I am intending to add to Punished by Parents in Law & Norah's Descent, plus am just finishing a new story titled 'You want me to do what?'
Regards Alfamann

Reviewer: JayUp4Fun (Edit) Rating: Feb 12, 2006
Nice steady pace but the bit with the cop in ch 12 seems out of sync. Why did that happen after Michael had explained everything? (8/10)

Reviewer: toby0821 (Edit) Rating: Jan 22, 2006
A wonderful story, delightful and not too heavy. I hope that there is more to come. Keep up the good work. (10/10)

Reviewer: bigcat (Edit) Rating: Jan 14, 2006
A delicious, delightful tale of gentle humiliation. (10/10)

Reviewer: woolfighter (Edit) Rating: Jan 10, 2006
Hi,dude, well done. Its a really enjoyable story.
Go on writing, please. (9/10)

Reviewer: Pottygirl (Edit) Rating: Jan 4, 2006
Nice and fun story, I liked and hope for more please. (8/10)

Reviewer: rhmusic (Edit) Rating: Nov 21, 2005
Totally wonderful, fun, engaging. (10/10)

Reviewer: shiann (Edit) Rating: Nov 5, 2005
wow i just thought it was great and i must asmit it made me wet (9/10)

Reviewer: Anniegal (Edit) Rating: Oct 31, 2005
Great! I look forward to the rest of the story. (8/10)

Reviewer: YNHumiliator (Edit) Rating: Oct 23, 2005
Excellent humiliation tale - more please! (9/10)

Reviewer: fishmiester (Edit) Rating: Oct 20, 2005
Oh God what a story.
It is fantastic. What a situation for poor Kym. Please, please give us some more so we can find out just how humiliated her in laws can make her.
Great story. Keep up the fantastic work (10/10)

Reviewer: mkemse (Edit) Rating: Oct 19, 2005
it was an average story, nothing major stuck out (7/10)

Reviewer: SensoryOverlord (Edit) Rating: Oct 19, 2005
I particularly liked the steady, slow rise in tension, as Kym's acceptance and anticipation grow. Can't wait for another chapter, and the in-law's response to Kym's latest lapse. (8/10)

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