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The New Girl at the Firm
Author: Semiater
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(Added on Oct 17, 2005)
(This month 82279 readers) (Total 138343 readers) |
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A young paralegal becomes a slave to a lawyer who knows her true submissive nature. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
teamster
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Jan 15, 2006 |
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always interested in stories written from the subs pov. her fears, ambivalence, etc. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
chattel69
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Oct 22, 2005 |
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I was great, can't wait for the following chapters. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Odysseus
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Oct 21, 2005 |
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There is something missing.. But before I get into that let Me say that I like the premise. The way the author builds the power connection between the Ttwo. Showing how One can and does lead. The setting between One in power and one who is an apprent unnoticed underling who is suddenly enrolled in His harem. How she responded to using the dildo in the bathroom.
What I didnt see... and perhaps will be in the next installment.... is more about the other half of the power exchange. Her role. How she responds and why. The struggle inside her . How she complies to the statement that she is no longer a free woman but his sexslut. So many authors seem to skim over that and get to the finale, how they did it in every room like rabbits yadda, yadda, yadda. I personally enjoy readinng of the inner demons inside all of us and how she deals with what is going on. The thoughts and emotions required to accept who and what she is.
Looking forward to reading more.
Odysseus
ps... I have read a few comments about lack of feedback and am doing My share.
(5/10)
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| Reviewer:
bdsmbill
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Oct 19, 2005 |
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I liked this story quite a lot. Nicely done. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Oct 19, 2005 |
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as always you have done it again, please keep adding to his one (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
kentondickerson
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Oct 19, 2005 |
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I like all of your stories. However, they all say "to be continued" and I never seem to see the continuations. Where can i find them? (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
DeGrinch
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Oct 19, 2005 |
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My goodness, you can write some good porn!! The writing, grammar and punctuation are all excelent making the story easy to read. As for content, well, you've hit on one of my favorate fantasies and expressed it very well. Please continue. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Toes
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Oct 18, 2005 |
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Once again... Bravo... you really know how to present a story that gets my juices flowing.
I like this style. You do it well. I look forward to part 2. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
spicym
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Oct 17, 2005 |
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loved it,can't wait for part 2 (9/10)
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