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Summer Holiday
Author: Ashtree
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(Added on Oct 12, 2005)
(This month 20893 readers) (Total 40700 readers) |
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Jenny goes on holiday |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 17, 2009 |
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nicely done (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
shark99
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Oct 19, 2005 |
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good story (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
lex ludite
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Oct 16, 2005 |
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Something a bit off the main track, very good. This reader places a high value on novelty or originality, a rare commodity these days. A serial lesbian rapist certainly fills the bill for me.It also helps that the writing style is fairly clean, although there appears to be an overdependence on "spiel cheque", for example dyke and duke are not interchangeable. (9/10)
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Malice
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Oct 15, 2005 |
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The actual rapes seem all to be over extremely quickly, Jenny seems to have this almost uncanny desire to remain with strap on. There is a tad bit of felt frustration between the reader and the main character about not being able to stay around with any particular person.
Probably why the chambermaid rape was completely the best part, followed by the last chapter with Sophie. Very much worthwhile read all in all though. (8/10)
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Dododecapod
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Oct 14, 2005 |
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MM, I like F/f, I like nc, this is rather heavenly, all up!
Not perfect, though. You clearly edit well, which is good, and your grammar is generally good, but some of your sentences run on, and sometimes you don't break a sentence when you change concepts.
Your femme rapist is maybe a little repetitive, also.
Still a most enjoyable piece. (8/10)
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