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Private Investigations
Author: Gina Hoisington
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(Added on Oct 12, 2005)
(This month 77278 readers) (Total 115144 readers) |
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This story is about a tough female private eye that is kidnapped by a slaver organization. After a tough start, she kicks ass. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mirage
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Oct 12, 2007 |
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the first person story telling put you right in the thick of the action. very absorbing. the heroine speak a bit corny but that was fun. a very entertaining read. (9/10)
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Venom
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Jun 3, 2007 |
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Tough heroine, sarcastic style, cool "The Maltese Falcon"-atmosphere and no fear of drastic measures.
Is there any chance for a sequel? (9/10)
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JimmyJump
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Mar 10, 2006 |
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Simply exquisite... (10/10)
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cymbidia
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Jan 3, 2006 |
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Hard-ass ball-breaker babe, oh yeh! I liked this story because it was well-written and was a new twist on an old theme. (9/10)
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DungeonMaster6
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Oct 15, 2005 |
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Kick ass story! If there was ever a guy who deserved to have his balls crushed and his dick cut off it was Blondie. I expected her to find Hector in that slave camp. (9/10)
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heycarrieanne
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Oct 15, 2005 |
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I am not sure if this was supposed to be a "spoof" or what, but trust me, no woman talks like the one you have here. The poor grammar you have her speaking was just too much for me to take! (7/10)
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teamster
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Oct 14, 2005 |
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amusing little story... something different. but is it a blazer or a bronco. i guess it doesnt matter they both smoke. (9/10)
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bdsmbill
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Oct 14, 2005 |
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This was a powerful, well crafted, and original story. I don't give out many tens, but this story deserved it. (10/10)
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La Toya
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Oct 14, 2005 |
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Great Story! (9/10)
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Breannefun
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Oct 14, 2005 |
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Sorry, this deserved a ten. This was just a REALLY good story. I loved the PI first person way of telling, and frankly I loved the ending. There were a few (very few) mistakes, mostly wrong words that SpellCheck would never have found, but fantastic. This was true art. As far as a beginning...well, this story seems done, but I would love to read more of Jaynie's cases! (10/10)
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Nicholas
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Oct 13, 2005 |
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Nicely crafted in an old-fashioned (but still entirely acceptable) style. A good read more than a turn-on. (9/10)
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mkemse
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Oct 13, 2005 |
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good start let's see where you go from here (8/10)
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