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Texas Death Row Market
Author: Darkhorse
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(Added on Oct 12, 2005)
(This month 15590 readers) (Total 43380 readers) |
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In the year 2014, state of Texas, was the first state to abolish death penalty. State of Texas would no longer maintain a death row; instead the inmates who committed violent crimes and homicide would be sold to anyone as a slave for the rest of their lives. |
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| Reviewer:
Ranai
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Nov 20, 2005 |
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Intriguing, well constructed power difference context. Casually applied cruelty has a charm all of its own.
Please continue the story, and please find someone to edit & proofread your text before you post. It is worth it.
An editorial thing: In this opening chapter, the dialogue is written in the style of a theatre script. This does not work well in prose. Please take any novels from your bookshelf and have a look how your favourite authors do it? For an amusing discussion of dialogue tags, see here: http://www.erotica-readers.com/ERA/WR/HeSaid.htm (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
dave_mis
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Oct 16, 2005 |
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I agree with DungeonMaster6, there must be more to this - but it has potential (8/10)
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heycarrieanne
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Oct 15, 2005 |
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The story is rather innovative, a good thing, but you have several typos which are quite distracting. I do look forward to reading more. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
DungeonMaster6
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Oct 15, 2005 |
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Good so far. There must be more to this,hopefully (5/10)
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