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Under His Thumb
Author: Nikita
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(Added on Oct 8, 2005)
(This month 30967 readers) (Total 72642 readers) |
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Nubile executive is forced to submit to a client's demands in order to "seal the deal." |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
heycarrieanne
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Apr 1, 2006 |
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I just discovered your stories and I have to say they are great. This one, like the others I have read, is quite well written and ... made me wet! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
nikita
(Edit) (Apr 1, 2006)
- Thank you Carrieanne. This one will be getting some updates soon. I hope you check back.
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| Reviewer:
pejanon
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Mar 4, 2006 |
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good stuff in the 'office games' genre.
characteisation AND heat - AND without too much pussyfooting!
Now if Nikita could persuaded to explore this a bit more .. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
nikita
(Edit) (Oct 13, 2005)
- Alright already! Seems the only way to satisfy the wolves is to add another chapter or two...Y'all are twisting my arm and I'm hearing you...Thank you for the feedback...I'll take it as a compliment.
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pejanon
(Edit) (Mar 4, 2006)
- What I really like about this story is that reasonable variety is not here just for it’s own sake but it seems to build up towards some goal (not that I mind just flowing Lindsay around, but the more the ‘merrier’.)
Cant wait for Ch EIGHT you promised chksng19. Interesting
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nikita
(Edit) (Mar 7, 2006)
- I think I hit the wrong key where is says Ch. 8...ROLF, or I was delirious. Probably the latter.
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| Reviewer:
Mad Lews
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Mar 1, 2006 |
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God what a slut! Of course we love it! Keep up the good work. My only suggestion would be to not have your major protagonist have somewhat similar names. I get confused easily when the blood drains away from my brain.
A story that just leaves ya throbin for more (10/10)
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- Replied by:
nikita
(Edit) (Oct 18, 2005)
- Slut!! (blushes) ... that's the nicest thing anyone's ever said.
Names?...Dick or Hertz? They are related, aren't they? Need smelling salts?...icy water? (she sneaks away giggling)
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Mad Lews
(Edit) (Oct 19, 2005)
- Not to burst your bubble but I was calling your character a slut. You know Lindsay or Leslie or whatever her name was. But I have to say you do have an intriguing avatar, and she doesn't seem to be giggling
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nikita
(Edit) (Oct 20, 2005)
- Oh no..you hurt me to the core!!! I figured out your comment about the names after my silly post. You can bet I'll never do that again! No siree!!
Wait till you hear the name of the new character in the next chapter. (eyes rolling.)
Avatar, hmm...she made an impression on you, hmm... Will an autographed photo do? no charge.
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Mad Lews
(Edit) (Mar 1, 2006)
- Well I'm still waitin on my autographed avatar but the new chapters make the wait worth while. Keep up the great waork
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Feb 28, 2006 |
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A fine, well told story with an interesting start and a world of possibilities.
Can't wait for more! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
nikita
(Edit) (Feb 28, 2006)
- Thank you chksng19. Chp 8 coming right up. Should be posted in next few days.
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Rabbit1
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Dec 11, 2005 |
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Very good story ---it is well written ---I enjoyed it (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
salpecam
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Nov 7, 2005 |
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Fantastic content, with so much potential for sequels. A reversal of my favourite, this story has an older man pushing himself onto a surprisingly willing younger female exec, the motive being self-advancement for her and face-spurting from him.
Excellent work. Any chance of some harsh nipple manipulation in episode 2? (9/10)
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- Replied by:
nikita
(Edit) (Nov 7, 2005)
- Again, Salpecam, you are too kind. The second and third chapter are cleaning up nicely and should be posted soon. Yes, this story is turning out to be a serial. So you have a request for nipple action...hmmm
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| Reviewer:
bee
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Oct 20, 2005 |
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yes we do love it!! keep 'em coming! (chapters that is...) (9/10)
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willman
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Oct 10, 2005 |
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Slightly too predictable. A good premise that could be expanded to include degradation as opposed to fantacy fulfillment. (i.e. not getting a contract and punishment from her boss for failure as a condition of future employment) (8/10)
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- Replied by:
nikita
(Edit) (Oct 10, 2005)
- Thank you willman. Your suggestion follows too closely to one of my favorite stories, Whore 94 and that was at the fore front of my mind. The level of predictability is a judgement call. Sometimes trying for the next notch up just doesn't work for me. It's like trying to drink milk and cranberry juice at the same time. I try to pick that up. When all else fails, I stay true to my voice and not force things. I'm happier with that.
In fact the degree of predictability is just a taste issue, isn't it?
Lindsey did what (whispering) I would have done.
Willman, I'm just a soccer mom who appreciates you read the story and rated it. You were quite generous with your rating anyway.
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| Reviewer:
ssprin
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Oct 10, 2005 |
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Good premise and writing. Explore her humiliation a little more. She is too anxious for it. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
nikita
(Edit) (Oct 10, 2005)
- Let's see, primarily she wanted to get that signature to score some points with Dick. When she saw those crops, suddenly, the price she had to pay for the signature wasn't so high; in fact, she would have begged to be spanked. Yes, I see your point...
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| Reviewer:
castle2001
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Oct 9, 2005 |
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Excellent story line, well told. Hope to see the intensification of control that both of the men involved will exert in further chapters. (9/10)
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rilawild
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Oct 9, 2005 |
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I enjoyed this story and I think it has great potential. I'd love to see it continued. Personally, I would have preferred to see a bit more of a build up. Perhaps she should have a few meetings with Mr Leslie where he drops more and more hints about what she'll need to do to get the contract. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
nikita
(Edit) (Oct 9, 2005)
- Thank you for reading this story and the thoughts about it. It's interesting you would like to see more buildup as it indicates a strong preference for foreplay in stories. I will put that in my think tank. Mr. Leslie, was such a slimeball, that she would have gotten wind of his motives and turned the tables on him quite quickly. It would be too predictable for the reader, would you agree? But hey, that could be another story!
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| Reviewer:
lilj999
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Oct 9, 2005 |
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can't wait for part 2. thanks for writing it. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
nikita
(Edit) (Oct 9, 2005)
- Many thanks lilj999. I will fuel the flames with further fodder...(is that what my alliteration?? Wow... it was an accident!)
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| Reviewer:
BigCat
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Oct 9, 2005 |
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Good effort. Nice intrigue and well done portrayal of the inner life of subject. Keep it up. Do more. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
nikita
(Edit) (Oct 9, 2005)
- Thanks for the encouragement. It fuels the juices...
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Oct 8, 2005 |
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i hope you plan to add more (7/10)
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- Replied by:
nikita
(Edit) (Oct 8, 2005)
- Thank you for taking the time to read and rate it.
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