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Humiliated in the End
Author: Nikita
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(Added on Oct 4, 2005)
(This month 10931 readers) (Total 23575 readers) |
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Soccer mom corresponds with a male friend. Blunt as a hammer, she tells a tale of humiliation suffered at the gynecologist's office. She's a pretty frisky lady, but lives in the Bible belt, where shame is a virtue. Topics include Viagra, Cialis, and vibrators. A wild ride for the suburban wife who subconsciously engineered the situation. Funny and lighthearted. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 23, 2009 |
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ecellent (9/10)
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chksng19
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Mar 6, 2006 |
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I'll bet it is true. Swinging from the chandiliers indeed. Love it, short and delightful. Up to your high standards. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
nikita
(Edit) (Mar 7, 2006)
- Thank you. Chuckling at the chandeliers? *grin
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| Reviewer:
salpecam
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Nov 7, 2005 |
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Excellent view inside Nikita's head for a moment. Puts all the other stuff into perspective...
Did you ever imagine yourself as being a character in a story? After the initial imaginary trip as the gyno in this story, and thinking what a sequel I could write, I found that I identified better with the mysterious recipient of these "diary entries". I found myself wanting to be the recipient of an imaginary Nikita-blog.
That's how much this story pulls me in, if you'll pardon the expression. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
nikita
(Edit) (Nov 7, 2005)
- Thank you for the review Salpecam. I blush at the thought!
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| Reviewer:
DungeonMaster6
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Oct 23, 2005 |
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Yep, it's another review from a man. My wife is on the verge of menopause and I do take Viagra( it works!) Call it my perverted mind if you want, but watching a woman in the V position is always a turn-on. Excellent job! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
nikita
(Edit) (Oct 23, 2005)
- Thank you very much DM6. I will try to gear my future stories to mmm...include more humiliation...(big smile) By the way, once she's in full swing into menopause, you may have to double up on the Viagra...check the stock performance, (not your supply on hand, silly)!
À votre service,
Nikita
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| Reviewer:
Breathless
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Oct 19, 2005 |
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Nice little peek into her thoughts, Nikita. I wasn't sure about having the notes addressed to some unknown "pen pal", but you expressed some interesting perspectives. Makes me less worried about approaching menopause! (8/10)
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- Replied by:
nikita
(Edit) (Oct 19, 2005)
- Ahh, but, Breathless, it is a male pen pal, with whom she feels comfortable enough to 'let her ponytail' down, a tongue in cheek communique.
On a REAL positive note, you have a LOT to look forward to in menopause...it will be yet ANOTHER reason to purchase DEPENDS...ROLF
I know it really wasn't what readers expected, but it was a hoot to write, a diary of self engineered humiliation.
Please look for TOYS, a follow up to the Walking on the Wild Side series. It was turned it in to Jinn last week. It should be more 'up your alley,' and in the flavor of this library (chuckling...a lot!)
You WERE generous in your review and I thank you sweet lady.
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J's blu
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Oct 17, 2005 |
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OMG that was great!!! i can soooo identify girl. and the writing was just how i am, singing along - in my mercedes benz :P - i must sayi find it slightly strange that the only reviews have been by MEN!! lol is this why it is a 'hidden' topic? come on girls!! votes for women!! i'm with you nikita luv blu (9/10)
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- Replied by:
nikita
(Edit) (Oct 18, 2005)
- Blu: You ROCK!!! I found it a little odd, too, that men were reviewing this piece, butt then, I think the title led the pervs (heh, heh) astray. It's one of my favorite pieces, a stream of free associations. I have a 'real' penchant, subconscious or not, for getting myself into...um...awkward situations. Come back for more...
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J's blu
(Edit) (Oct 18, 2005)
- :D gladly!
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| Reviewer:
pejanon
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Oct 6, 2005 |
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This little tale is so simple and straightforward that it could actually be true - not that it matters. However 'simple' is enchanted by numerous comments and observations on topics that are rarely treated in the Library. Very readable.
Oh, so it isn't very hot in the usual sense - it deals with "implied heat' - also something not seen too often. Rewarding.
Novel approach, lucid writting and original topic should be revarded. 9
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- Replied by:
nikita
(Edit) (Oct 6, 2005)
- I hope you give out spankings with the scores. I'll be expecting 9. ;o
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| Reviewer:
Mad Lews
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Oct 6, 2005 |
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You definitely get points for originality. The subject you write on seems to be politely ignored here. The style you write in is an unpretentious stream of conscience that is humorous, while remaining clear and lucid. I liked it. You get a Grin from my significant other and a thumbs up from me. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
nikita
(Edit) (Oct 6, 2005)
- "Thanks," she said meekly. "You are too kind and forgiving." I agree about the 'ignore.' It wasn't intentional, just flawed thinking.
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