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Lady Wild
Author: Pandora
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(Added on Jun 19, 2001)
(This month 18288 readers) (Total 34109 readers) |
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Set in the Midwest of America during the age of pioneers, a revengeful young woman captures the outlaw who had killed her husband and makes him pay. |
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Average (?):  (4.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
hyphen666
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Jun 19, 2001 |
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The writing is stilted and cliche' strewn to the point of being funny. I'm not sure whether this is a man trying to write like a woman or a girl trying to write like a woman. In either case, it was a failure. This tale is another perfect example of spell-check gone wrong. The word is spur, not spore! You spur, you don't spurt! The use of a foreign phrase that is not standard except perhaps to a college student just starting out is not acceptable. But that last paragraph was a real hoot. The guy is painting beneath you while you pull on his lid? I haven't read stuff like this since The Sinking of the Odradek Stadium. Better luck next time. (4/10)
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