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Kennel Bitch
Author: H. Dean
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(Added on Oct 1, 2005)
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A slave tells the story of how she earned her new name: Kennel Bitch |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Feb 10, 2009 |
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To start off, for someone that is always going-on about spelling mistakes, H. Dean has left quite a few in this here tale.
Secondly, for someone who's often criticizing lack of technical skills, there's serious faults here in that department too.
Now, before someone starts thinking I'm reviewing "Kennel Bitch" just to have a go at H. Dean's character, rest assured, I'm not.
It just strikes me as odd that someone as knowledgable as H. Dean neglected to do a thorough clean-up of what has been written.
Also, this is not "her" story, it's an excerpt of it, an episode involving "her" introduction to canine comings and goings, so to speak.
Before you start looking for tar and feathers and a hefty rail, I must add that I enjoyed the story. Very much so. Even with the slight lack in backbone the woman shows. Because, there IS a serious difference between being submissive and being a doormat.
Anyway, I just thought that H. Dean would have presented us with a more elaborate, polished work. Of course, there's the justified excuse that the body of the tale wasn't Dean's doing, but still.
JJ (8/10)
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- Replied by:
H Dean
(Edit) (Feb 10, 2009)
- I appreciate the review - a further comment is in your messages on your profile. The reply function was not working when I sent the reply so I sent it there.
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Oct 16, 2007 |
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very nicely done (8/10)
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- Replied by:
H Dean
(Edit) (Oct 16, 2007)
- Wow - this is a surprise to get a positive review on an old tale. Thanks, very much.
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| Reviewer:
StillBehindBlueEyes
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Jun 25, 2006 |
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Left you wanting more. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
H Dean
(Edit) (Jun 26, 2006)
- THanks for reviewing this story. I am working on the "more" part.
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| Reviewer:
badsubbiegirl
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Jun 8, 2006 |
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i found this story to be short but exciting can't wait to read more when you finish. thank you (10/10)
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- Replied by:
H Dean
(Edit) (Jun 9, 2006)
- Thank you very kindly for your review and rating. A sequel is in the works. But, like so many things, it takes time and it is one of several stories I am working on.
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| Reviewer:
Piret3
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Apr 22, 2006 |
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good writing. a bit short (8/10)
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- Replied by:
H Dean
(Edit) (Apr 23, 2006)
- Thanks for taking hte time out to give a quick review. I may have a follow up for this story. The original author has given me the go-ahead. So, it may get lengthened.
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| Reviewer:
nikita
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Oct 3, 2005 |
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I liked it. The story has a lot of potential and the author/co-author could go back and add a few more juicy episodes of bitch dog behavior. The description of the bitch mating was very hot. This reader wants more, please. A little less in the beginning, a lot more at the end, and just a little more about the man who brought the dog. That would be the spice. Now that you got my grocery list, what are you waiting for! heh, heh (7/10)
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- Replied by:
H Dean
(Edit) (Oct 4, 2005)
- I will mention your comments to the original author and see what comes of it. Thank you for the review.
- Replied by:
nikita
(Edit) (Oct 4, 2005)
- What do you think about the reviews you've been given on this co-authorship story? Perhaps this question falls out of the realm of the review board, butt, (outside of the lowest, most discriminating review on this story,) have you had any agreement or encouragement to continue?
- Replied by:
H Dean
(Edit) (Oct 4, 2005)
- I sent an E-Mail to my friend so she could see the reviews. If she gives the okay - or decides to go forward herself you may see another installment. I've a suspision that this tale would receive higher marks were it a bit longer. We shall see how it turns out.
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| Reviewer:
Mad Lews
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Oct 2, 2005 |
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Ouch! Short, nasty, and degrading, just as advertised. Hope the original author lets you run with it as I'm sure the young lady has a few more interesting adventures to talk about. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
H Dean
(Edit) (Oct 2, 2005)
- Thank you kindly for the review. I will mention these comments to my friend. Who knows, she may come up with a secondary tale to implement.
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BDSgirl
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Oct 1, 2005 |
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well, i found it erotic, but then, i like bitch girl stories. the writing was good, it is a short story. i would enjoy more of her story, if it was allowed to be told.
yours blu (7/10)
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- Replied by:
H Dean
(Edit) (Oct 2, 2005)
- Thanks for the review. It is much shorter than my typical writing. As I stated at the beginning, it was not originally my story and, while I did modify it, I attempted not to stray from the original story too much.
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| Reviewer:
heycarrieanne
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Oct 1, 2005 |
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Wow! The beginning of your story was so mundane, that I almost stopped there. I am glad that I got past the boring start to the wowzer ending. Will you continue it? (7/10)
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- Replied by:
H Dean
(Edit) (Oct 2, 2005)
- Thanks for the review, Carrieanne, the Hollies fan. The story will not likely be extended. I feel it would be a bit unfair since the tale was not originally mine. On the other hand, should the story's original author allow me, I might extend it.
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| Reviewer:
tiffany love
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Oct 1, 2005 |
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the story wasn't one bit erotic
it was more a turn off than a turn on (2/10)
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- Replied by:
H Dean
(Edit) (Oct 3, 2005)
- Tiffany, I suspect you don't care for beastiality themed stories. If this is the case you should have avoided reading it. If it is not the case it would be more helpful if you expressed why you find it off putting. I would appreciate further input should you be so inclined.
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