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The Locker Room Author: Thorn
(Added on Sep 28, 2005) (This month 51075 readers) (Total 63124 readers)
Sara has just finished swimming and is about to leave the gym when a man grabs her from behind and holds her against the lockers for another man's (and ultimately Sara's) pleasure.

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Weighed Average (?): (7/10)
Average Rating: (7.5/10)
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Reviewer: linkiebound (Edit) Rating: Mar 18, 2007
mmmmmmmmmmm liked it very much
(8/10)

Reviewer: Sabrina (Edit) Rating: Mar 26, 2006
Thank you, you took me right into my own fantasies, and not many writers do that! Maybe that's because most writers are male, and really don't know what turns a girl on. More detail would have been nice, and as you concede in your own comments, it warranted much further development, but it was a commendable first effort and I'm certainly not in a mood to nit-pick. (8/10)

Reviewer: La Toya (Edit) Rating: Sep 29, 2005
To short and missing a lot of details. (5/10)

Reviewer: Curtis (Edit) Rating: Sep 28, 2005
All right then, let's hear from the male half of the readership. This story is very well written, and very hot. No one got mangled, but someone did get dominated and raped. A real rape, not a guy inviting his poker buddies to poke his girlfriend. This is a good story, at least for male readers. (10/10)
Replied by: Thorn (Edit) (Sep 29, 2005)
Thanks, Curtis! I'm baffled that it seems the men (you) like this more than the women, but the encouragement is appreciated!

Reviewer: heycarrieanne (Edit) Rating: Sep 28, 2005
This story is obviously a male fantasy! This story is very under-developed and needs a lot more details to flesh it out. {{shaking head}} Why men think a woman will orgasm while being raped is just beyond me. (5/10)
Replied by: Thorn (Edit) (Sep 29, 2005)
I'm a chick. Granted, I chose a maleish sounding name (Thorn).
As for the rest, yes, it is underdeveloped. It's my first story, and I just wanted to get it out there without adding to and correcting it over and over, because if I waited too long I probably wouldn't have submitted anything. Nevertheless, thanks for taking the time to read and review it, and I hope you like subsequent stories more.
Replied by: heycarrieanne (Edit) (Sep 29, 2005)
Thorn is nothing ... I seved a Mistress named Hunter once. LOL And I look forward to reading more of your work. I have several stories that I am too afraid to submit, so you are much braver than I am.

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