|
|
|
|
|
A Dog From Hell
Author: Dee Driscoll
|
| |
(Added on Sep 21, 2005)
(This month 37619 readers) (Total 75291 readers) |
| |
Helen is in love. David likes to play. Helen will humiliate herself for her love. David thinks this is a great idea. |
| Ratings and Reviews: |
| Number
of Ratings: 13 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
| 1 |
2 |
3 |
4 |
5 |
6 |
7 |
8 |
9 |
10 |
| 0% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
8% |
46% |
46% |
|
Weighed
Average (?):  (9.5/10) |
| Average
Rating: (9.5/10) |
Highest
Rating:  (10/10) |
Lowest
Rating:  (8/10) |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Jan 26, 2009 |
| |
Aw, what a wonderful character drawing Helen turns out to be. Dee Driscoll sure knows how to paint a humiliating picture.
Extremely high profile storytelling, both in pace and plot.
JJ (10/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
powerofdenial
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Oct 11, 2007 |
| |
It's a well written story, with a fine style. I liked iz very much, although I'd enjoy seeing some character development on David's part. (9/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
TomOfSweden
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Sep 25, 2006 |
| |
I loved everything about this story. I'm really into watersports and humiliation so I loved to see a story devoted to it. It was great how Helens feelings of humiliation were portrayed. My only regret is that you haven't made more stories in the series that I can read.
The language and grammar I thought was top class and the rythm and lay-out made it easy to read. (10/10)
|
| |
- Replied by:
Dee Driscoll
(Edit) (Sep 27, 2006)
- Thanks Tom. I actually plan to add further chapters to the story, have the whole thing sketched but just need time to actually write it up....
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
mkemse
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Jul 17, 2006 |
| |
nice job, very well written (9/10)
|
| |
- Replied by:
Dee Driscoll
(Edit) (Jul 18, 2006)
- Thank you, mkemse. Very much appreciated.
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
darkavenger
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Apr 20, 2006 |
| |
Dee, the story is definitely believable and vivid, perhaps too vivid for my taste in what Helen did in the toilet in chp 1. Past that point though, I think the humiliation is awesome - so thick you could feel it dripping. David feels so much like a real character, and one that everyone would love to hate - his cruel nonchalance, his political incorrectness and that rapping is just fantastic. A short masterpiece that I am tempted to give a 10, but didn't only because it wouldn't be fair to the longer masterpieces then. :) Well done. (9/10)
|
| |
- Replied by:
Dee Driscoll
(Edit) (Apr 27, 2006)
- Cheers, 'avenger (you are not related to Marvel's Avengers by any chance? I've always fancied meeting Tony Stark, you know...). I'm glad you found most of the stuff that I put in there to be working for you... Part three will be posted, um, eventually...
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
bigcat
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Apr 8, 2006 |
| |
A wonderful piece of writing. Among the very best on this site. Great character portrayal, terrific inner life. Short and pungent. One of the best. (10/10)
|
| |
- Replied by:
Dee Driscoll
(Edit) (Apr 10, 2006)
- Thank you, 'cat. There's part three kicking around my harddrive at the moment but it needs to be massaged into existence and currently I seem to be out of time to do anything fun...
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
lilj999
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Oct 9, 2005 |
| |
i love your stories. this was definitely hoooooot. :-) (10/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
H Dean
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Oct 4, 2005 |
| |
Short and sweet - as sweet as this sort of tale can manage, that is. Good depictions and good story telling.
**Edit - I see you are continuing this tale in as high quality fashion as it began. I await more. (9/10)
|
| |
- Replied by:
Dee Driscoll
(Edit) (Sep 22, 2005)
- Thank you Dean. I feel the score you gave my story may be a little too high, but hey, I am not complaining. Actually, the story so far, short as it may be, is just the introductory chapter to a longer piece of writing (I'm pretty sure I put 'Part 1' somewhere up there). I decided to post this one just to see whether anyone finds it amusing enough to comment. I have written a large portion of part 2 but, since it contains no sex whatsoever (!!!!), just a bunch of what I like to consider character development, I won't post it until I get some, er, erotic content in there. So, thanks again and if you liked it, watch this space for more.
- Replied by:
H Dean
(Edit) (Sep 22, 2005)
- Despite your humility I would disagree about the tale's deserving of such a high mark. Some tales are too amitious and don't know where or how to end. I found that your tale managed to end in the right place and in the right way. I look forward to future writings.
***Regarding no sex - I wrote an entire tale with nearly no sex whatsoever. Sex is not necessary for something to be erotic.
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
mastersall
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Oct 1, 2005 |
| |
Excellent tale... Well crafted and thank god doesnt resort to it all being a dream or a happy love story.. loved the passion and teh total abaondon you have conveyed (10/10)
|
| |
- Replied by:
Dee Driscoll
(Edit) (Oct 3, 2005)
- Thank you mastersall. Actually, it IS a love story (well, kind of), albeit not quite happy... After all, we all know love hurts, right?
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
Shakespeare
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Sep 29, 2005 |
| |
The website shows this story as a "part one" and it better be just that--the first part of a great story. Well conceived and well executed. The dialogue is believeable which is mighty rare. Might be the best humiliation story I've come across. On an internet where 999 out of a 1000 stories are immediately forgettable, this is one that stands out. Great job!
Just don't write too many parts--it's usually the downfall of a good story! (10/10)
|
| |
- Replied by:
Dee Driscoll
(Edit) (Sep 30, 2005)
- Well, being reviewed by Shakespeare is indeed something I'll want to have in my CV, hehehe.
Anyway, yes, really, this IS part one and part two has already been posted, so it should be up in the next update. I hear you about writing too many parts and will try to keep it at natural length. I am just afraid that the subsequent parts, containing action interspersed with exposition might be just too pretentious for the average reader...
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
PLP21
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Sep 24, 2005 |
| |
it was great, can't wait for more, need more!!! (9/10)
|
| |
- Replied by:
Dee Driscoll
(Edit) (Sep 26, 2005)
- Thanks, uh, you don't like to mince words, eh? Anyway, there IS more coming. It's almost there.
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
Elkor
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Sep 23, 2005 |
| |
The author does an excellent job of representing the mindset of the character in a vivid and believable fashion.
(9/10)
|
| |
- Replied by:
Dee Driscoll
(Edit) (Sep 26, 2005)
- Thank you for the review. I hope it was believable and vivid enough. I've never been a woman so I wouldn't know for sure.
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
DeGrinch
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Sep 23, 2005 |
| |
The writing is well done, making it easy to read. The charactors need more devolepment however, hopefully that will come in next chapters. The humiliation in the story is part of my personal 'kink' and I thought it was done very well. Keep up the good work.
(8/10)
|
| |
- Replied by:
Dee Driscoll
(Edit) (Sep 26, 2005)
- Thank you, DeGrinch. Yes, I wanted to make the first part quick and easy to absorb, not to scare the potential readers off with my usual penchant for expositioon. However, it comes in later. I have nearly finished the second chapter which is probably going to test some readers' patience with its, um, character development...
|
|
|
About 