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Master and I
Author: cuteli'lslut
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(Added on Sep 21, 2005)
(This month 9544 readers) (Total 17651 readers) |
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She was his girl... then his wife... now his slave... forever. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
yuni4u
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Sep 23, 2005 |
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Enjoyed the first Chapter very much.....It was believable,and Interesting to see the Master role from Inside.........Looking forward to the Next Chapter (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Mad Lews
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Sep 22, 2005 |
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You've written very nice story. It has a balanced point of view, which isn't easy. I hope you continue and explore the some of the reasons behind each of your roles and reactions to each other. (8/10)
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heycarrieanne
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Sep 22, 2005 |
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Your writing is okay ... and other than those italics I didn't see any typos. However, I just didn't feel anything ZIP to their story. (6/10)
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H Dean
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Sep 21, 2005 |
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Good flow and solid writing skills improve an otherwise common tale. This is not to say that it was a bad tale nor is it suffering in eroticism. The only reason this story suffered as low as a 7 was because the theme is such common faire. This does not, however, detract from the general quality of the tale. I would like to see what this author can do with other themes with a less common thread. Also, the italics was a bit distracting. (7/10)
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