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Back to Neighbors
Author: Pallidan
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(Added on Sep 18, 2005)
(This month 14928 readers) (Total 29172 readers) |
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Mother finds book of older women being dominated in her son bed. When told it came from the neighbor's daughter, she decides to go over and tell on her. Unfortunately, for her. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Rocky
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Sep 18, 2005 |
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Much improved writing skills, but the story itself was lacking. I can't put my finger on exactly what was wrong, but the story line itself is old, tired and worn out. I do applaud the improvement in your writing skills, though. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
bigg1lofty
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Sep 18, 2005 |
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Excellent well written story with hopefully many more chapters to follow detailing the son taking control of his mom along with the neighbours daughter (10/10)
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