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The House Tour
Author: gogo
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(Added on Sep 14, 2005)
(This month 56272 readers) (Total 80026 readers) |
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An attractive and elegant married real estate agent is raped and ravished by a young female client during a tour of a mansion that the agent is listing. The client takes "open house" to an all new meaning. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
joepro
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Sep 16, 2005 |
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I enjoyed reading this story. The author keeps the story interesting all the way to the end. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
gogo
(Edit) (Sep 17, 2005)
- thank you, joepro. glad you liked it. . . and thank you for reading it and taking time to drop by! BTW: wife and I were just shown a house by a "drop dead" good looking real estate agent who, I thought, keep looking at my wife's breasts. My Freudian way of turning the tables on her!
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| Reviewer:
bdsmbill
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Sep 16, 2005 |
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Nicely done story. I am not usually a big fan of F/f stories, but this one is worth the read. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
gogo
(Edit) (Sep 16, 2005)
- thank you for the comment and, of course, the read.
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| Reviewer:
sunburststrat
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Sep 16, 2005 |
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I thought the story was constructed very well. It is interesting that Kathleen is clearly identified as a bitch by the 2nd sentence. The whole premise of the house tour creates a nice setup or trap for Kathleen. The author definitely has a talent for descriptive detail. The various sections could have delineated more clearly with bigger, bold font for the sections (e.g. The Riding Crop, The Brunch, etc), and it was long enough to be broken into more than one part, I thought. I liked the alibi at the end. Kathleen was just going to have to accept it. I'll be looking forward to more from this writer. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
gogo
(Edit) (Sep 16, 2005)
- thank you, subburststrat, for your input and the time you took to read, and comment. gogo
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Sep 14, 2005 |
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good story but strange layout the was you highlight only partso the story (7/10)
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- Replied by:
gogo
(Edit) (Sep 15, 2005)
- strange layout?? i do appreciate the read and taking the time to comment! tx!
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| Reviewer:
cwamsley
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Sep 14, 2005 |
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Liked the flow. Keeps the reader interested. A little rough around the edges, but very good. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
gogo
(Edit) (Sep 14, 2005)
- Thanks cwamsley. I do want to apologize to the readers for submitting my next to last draft by mistake, rather than the final version. I usually play with different names for the characters and note that the draft I filed had two names for the victim "kathleen" and "Elizabeth". In the final version the name was changed to Kathleen. Sorry, I have asked the webmaster to make the change. I'll work on the rough edges, but thanks for the read!
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