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The Pony Store
Author: Mabel White
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(Added on Aug 31, 2005)
(This month 95048 readers) (Total 116886 readers) |
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Jazzy finds herself trussed up and waiting for something to happen. How did she get in this long line of naked women! |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (6/10) |
| Average
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
heycarrieanne
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Sep 1, 2005 |
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Very, very confusing!!! Difficult to understand who the male slaves were without some sort of explanation in the beginning. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
SirThomas
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Aug 31, 2005 |
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Standard stuff, rape wise. Nothing out of the ordinary. Abusive without much purpose behind it. No depth or emotion in it. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
Engineer
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Aug 31, 2005 |
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Not really catching. Many well-known motifs. Tale is predictable, sometimes implausible. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
H Dean
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Aug 31, 2005 |
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Poor phrasing and poor structure combined with a main character who has completely unrealistic reactions lead this story. A prime example of a nonsensical line is;”I wonder what color mine must be because it feels enormous in my ass.” I don't know why someone would wonder what color something is BECAUSE of how it feels. IN closing, I did not finish this story so it may have improved towards the end. I jsut couldn't get any further than I did. (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dürrer
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Aug 31, 2005 |
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(8/10)
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