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The Missionary
Author: DungeonMaster
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(Added on Aug 26, 2005)
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A CIA agent is sent to an African nation posing as a missionary. However, she is found out and arrested, imprisoned, and tortured when she refuses to divulge her code name. She is then sent to a camp where she is trained to be a sex-slave. |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
Average
Rating:  (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Mothbrad
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May 16, 2007 |
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A quite good interrogation/sex-slave-training story that sticks to the script, pretty much. Recommended. (7/10)
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kemosabe
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Sep 9, 2005 |
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Desite the occasional misuse of words, I found the story better than the other reviews did. Perhaps my imagination took care of the mishaps but this type of story always gets me going. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Aug 29, 2005 |
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Not a bad start for your first story. I hope there will be another chapter or two. I think if you give just a little more detail of the torture, and what she feels you will have a winner (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Jeneric
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Aug 29, 2005 |
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Definatley a great story line. I would have liked to have read a bit more about each torture instead of going from one to the next so quickly. I as a reader look to be transported into the story...to feel the victim's pain, to be able to see it in my head as it's happening.
Excellent idea...more details :) (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Vorpal Bull
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Aug 27, 2005 |
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I really enjoyed the tension of your story, but I think you could have used some more editing. there were several instances where a word was spelled correctly, but it was simply incorrect. For instance, a word would be "piece", whereas it was clearly supposed to have been "peace". Keep writing! Just for clarification, "5" describes "OK, but has some promise, the author could improve it" (5/10)
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