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Class Day Trip
Author: Paladin
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(Added on Aug 20, 2005)
(This month 56275 readers) (Total 66921 readers) |
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This was writen to be a continuation of a 'Modern Dairy' but never posted. |
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Weighed
Average (?): (6/10) |
Average
Rating: (6.5/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
AsianAngel
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Sep 4, 2005 |
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I haven't read "Modern Dairy," so I can't comment on that, but this was interesting. I agree that older subjects would have made it better for me. Also, there were some small typos that jolted me whenever I saw them. Overall I really did enjoy this one, though it could have been better. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
nikita
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Aug 26, 2005 |
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It would have been a much better read if you would have kept to the original style of the story. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Aug 20, 2005 |
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the story was good but using older subjects would have made it much better (7/10)
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