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Mary and Elizabeth
Author: jan311648
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(Added on Aug 20, 2005)
(This month 148210 readers) (Total 187384 readers) |
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Mary owns and runs an expensive Boarding Kennels business in a remote part of California. Taking into her head the notion that it would be pleasant to live and be treated like one of her 'guests' for a month, she finds a willing Domme to indulge her. But she gets more than she'd bargained for! |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 1, 2008 |
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nothing great but it was enjoyable to read
This only issue I have is that it is hard to accept this as it in physicaly impossoble for a Animal to impregnante a human, it simply can not be done (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Mar 28, 2006 |
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Very well written and thouroughly enjoyable tale. Though for me the epilogue was a tad gruesome, sensitive sucker I am...
Thank you very much for your excellent contribution(s).
JJ (9/10)
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bcsollte
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Nov 20, 2005 |
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I must agree with Mad Lews, in that I'm not usually into Femdom. However I do love petification stories and this is a good one. One question, how was Mary prevented from standing erect? The sore throat manages to address her loss of voice, but if tendons had been severed I'd think she'd still have pain or at least a scar and not just pain when she attempted to stand.
BZ (7/10)
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bee
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Sep 29, 2005 |
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A sick mind is a joy for ever!
You truly are my favorite writer. (9/10)
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RhondaLee
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Aug 23, 2005 |
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Hot and creative. (9/10)
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Mad Lews
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Aug 22, 2005 |
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While I'm not much into Femdom I do make exceptions and this story was a worthy one. Great character development. Who would have thought pups could be so complex. You've come up with a lovely business plan as well, when I say you have a very sick mind I hope you realize that's a complement. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
jan311648
(Edit) (Aug 30, 2005)
- Many thanks, M.L. - be assured that I accept your comments in the spirit they were intended!
Many times the logical development from the initial preposition behind a story leads me to explore paths I'm not particularly proud of treading, but I find this unavoidable.
As an example of me going really OTT, please see my next - and last - effort in the saga of Jane's adventures in Self-Bondage. (Advert.)sage 'Jane's '
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| Reviewer:
Psylent1
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Aug 21, 2005 |
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Very good and does a very nice job of showing things from the eyes of the puppygirl. (9/10)
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castle2001
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Aug 21, 2005 |
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Well thought out. One of the best of this type of story.
(9/10)
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| Reviewer:
many
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Aug 21, 2005 |
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i enjoed this story
maybe abit more on the breedng side could be put in very well done (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
heycarrieanne
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Aug 20, 2005 |
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A great read!! Normally, I tend to give up on the long stories because they just drag on and on, but yours kept me reading until the bitter and sad ending. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
JimmyJump
(Edit) (Mar 28, 2006)
- Try Tolstoļ's "War And Peace", and then we'll talk about overly long and neverending stories...
JJ
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