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Initiation to Slavery
Author: slaveofaffina
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(Added on Aug 20, 2005)
(This month 21672 readers) (Total 60494 readers) |
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Slave Training of a virgin male slave by his Cousin sister and arch lady rival in college to slavery |
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| Reviewer:
Oden
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Aug 26, 2005 |
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I have to agree with Rocky. This is a poor effort.Technical writing skills are poor in regard to grammar and sentence structure. Plot and story development is lacking too. (3/10)
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Rocky
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Aug 21, 2005 |
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Overall, a poor effort. Bad sentence structure, many misspellings, and lack of punctuation made it nearly impossible to read at times. Even your synopsis was nearly unintelligible. (3/10)
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mkemse
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Aug 20, 2005 |
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good story but hard to read at times (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
mathew
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Aug 20, 2005 |
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Nice Story. I recommend for real slaves (9/10)
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