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Motel Convention
Author: Pallidan
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(Added on Aug 17, 2005)
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A motel clerk watches an elderly black lady check in with her white slavegirl and wonders what it would be like. She decides to try it. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (4.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (4/10) |
Highest
Rating:  (7/10) |
Lowest
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| Reviewer:
slaveneedledick
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Aug 19, 2005 |
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I have to agree with Lakewood's assessment. The author needs to proof read his work. If English is not his native language then he needs to find a proof reader. He writes some good stories yet others he just writes poorly. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
C_Lakewood
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Aug 19, 2005 |
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This is indeed typical of the massive amount of
stuff that this author has spewed onto this
site. In the first paragraph, we are introduced
to an "elderly black lady" ("in her early 30s")
and a "young blonde" ("in her 40s"). Later, we
are shown that Pallidan still has not grasped
the concept of adding 's to a noun to form a
possessive and reminded that he seems to think
"Owwllll" is the same as "Oww!!!!!" And, as far
as plot, characterization, and wit are
concerned, once again, we are treated to the
same old pile of steaming drivel. Though he
is not the worst writer here, IMO the only
thing worth reading about a Pallidan story is
the synopsis (which is often deceptively good).
(1/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Aug 17, 2005 |
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on par with your other stories (7/10)
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