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Making Rena Do The Unreasonable
Author: Sal Pecam
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(Added on Aug 17, 2005)
(This month 11346 readers) (Total 25464 readers) |
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Years after the voluptuous Rena taunted me as a young teenager, I return and she inadvertently gives me the chance to get my own back and my cock into her, whether she likes it or not. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
CarolinaSpkr
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Sep 18, 2005 |
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WOW
How about relating a real obedience spanking followed by a butt plug?
Please give us a detailed description of her ass, skin and it's texture.
Very well enjoyed and excited for more. (9/10)
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nothing
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Aug 29, 2005 |
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Older women generally aren't my thing but, hey this was well written and left me eager for the next chapter. I thought the first anal scene was done particularly well. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
nikita
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Aug 17, 2005 |
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A well written revenge story. The protagonist doesn't portray the mature, former tart as undesireable, but quite the opposite. He defines his reason for revenge on this woman as plausible for a young man in puberty, however, he still hangs on to the humiliation he felt as a teen well into adulthood.
The sexual humiliation she suffers, to his delight, is quite hot and vividly described. The last act forced on the woman is priceless.
The story is told in the first person, a difficult thing to do, but done very well here. The writer could have spent a little more time polishing up the story.
To my delight, you can tell from the colloquialisms that he is a Brit! This is a story worthy of a place on my bookshelf. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Aug 17, 2005 |
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the story was good but there were parts were it seemed to skip from one point to another, but i still hope you plan to add more (7/10)
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