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The Subjection of Mom and Sis
Author: R.B. Thibo
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(Added on Aug 13, 2005)
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Three outcast teenage boys spend a lot of there time wanking off to the fantasies of bondage videos. That is until one weekend when they lose all interest in the video fantasies… |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
nakdsub
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I see this is an old story and I suppose, has no hopes of continuing, too bad. I would love to see what he had in store for his sister. (9/10)
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mkemse
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Mar 31, 2006 |
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I enjoyed the story altho a bit unrealistic, i wish the author had spent less time refering to mom and son and more time with the detailso of the story (7/10)
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SirBarry
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Jan 1, 2006 |
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excellant story for the genre (9/10)
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Oden
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Aug 29, 2005 |
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Regardless of the writer's warning about his writing skills, there really is no reason not to use a spellchecker. The story is repetitive as to vocabulary. The writing style is simplistic. The plot is ok but could be developed much better with some work and editing. (5/10)
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waltermassa
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Aug 16, 2005 |
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Stupid lads discouraging RB Thibo! Chapter one is outstanding and hardonning (!). Heading for the sis theme - and don't show any sympathy. Mom wans't worth that either, so far. Thanx a thick, huge, slimy lot!
Walter (9/10)
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La Toya
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Aug 15, 2005 |
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Nice story. While I understand not caring for what some people say when they review your story. I will wait to see what is coming in new chapters. (8/10)
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altair
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Aug 14, 2005 |
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La trame de cette histoire est interessante et j'attends avec impatience d'en connaître la suite.
Il y a quelques bonnes idees et j'espere donc que cela va continuer ainsi.
Je pense par contre qu'un melange des scenes passées et actuelles seraient le bienvenu : Une fois que les 3 comperes prennent leur repas, on part definitivement sur le recit passé de Roger.
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Rocky
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Aug 14, 2005 |
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Interesting, if overdone, story line. Writing skills were barely acceptable, IMHO. For instance, people get "acne," not "acme." That, and I still can't figure out about the alligator clip...was it on the nipple or clitoris? I've never seen a clit attached to a breast. Recommendation: Use one of the volunteer proofreaders. (6/10)
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