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28 Day Trial Period
Author: sarijak
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(Added on Aug 6, 2005)
(This month 64941 readers) (Total 101792 readers) |
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The last thing Mika expected to see when she came home from work was a nearly naked redhead lying bound to her bed. Eve is a special introductory offer for joining a slave club and Mika has her for 28 days before deciding whether to buy her or not. The trouble is Mika's not sure what to do. After all, what possible use can she have for a gorgeous, 22-year old American redhead who can't cook, can't clean and keeps losing the post? |
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JimmyJump
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Jan 17, 2012 |
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Loved every minute of this story, or rather, every page.
Like Dryhill said, the interaction between and the characterization of both leads is astonishingly well done, with very nice conversations and the punctuation of their little mannerisms adding to the overall picture.
A delight to behold.
JJ (9/10)
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Stephen Miletus
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Jan 7, 2012 |
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A delightful change on the usual tale of "Dom acquires sex slave & proceeds to inflict all sorts of horrible pain & humiliation upon her." Not that I don't enjoy reading that kind of tale, but after reading enough of them I start feeling embarrassed about my sexual desires around inflicting discomfort, bondage, & humiliation on others, whether willing or not. In this story I came to empathize with the characters, & wanted to see them achieve a happy resolution. I would enjoy reading a sequel to this story, which confirmed Mika & Eve lived "happily ever after" -- or at least as happily as conditions in their world permitted them. (9/10)
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Dryhill
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Apr 14, 2010 |
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This is my second time of reading this story and it is even better than the first time i read it. The characterization is very good and the unease between a very reluctant slave and an almost reluctant Mistress is very, very good (and extremely unusual).
Whilst it is unlikely laws allowing slavery to exist will ever come into being, it does make the story more believeable, because the slave girl cannot just get up and walk away.
Please, please let us have some more chapters about these two, plus of course a and b. Please do not keep us waiting any longer. (10/10)
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Dryhill
(Edit) (Jul 22, 2014)
- Well more than four years have gone by and two further readings of this excellent story. Please, please ...... pretty please may we have some more about the characters in this story?
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needsabeating18
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Apr 1, 2008 |
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AMAZING! This story really captured the Mistress and slave relationship (10/10)
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Mist
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Mar 27, 2008 |
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Very good story and well written!! (10/10)
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rob.wilson
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Dec 28, 2005 |
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Nice story about a new owner and a new slave. I liked the psychologogy alot, and overall it was a very good story. (8/10)
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master2slavesny
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Nov 29, 2005 |
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was very sensual and well written. Enjoyed it alot. Waiting for more stories from the author :) (10/10)
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hers2keep
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Sep 28, 2005 |
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Excellent story, great build-up. Showcased the evolving of a new slave very elegantly. Makes me want the sequel... (10/10)
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LordVetinari
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Aug 21, 2005 |
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Great concepts, intriguing ideas, and well executed. I like more pain and suffering, but still well worth the read. (9/10)
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Aug 11, 2005 |
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nice psychology (9/10)
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Aug 10, 2005 |
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Stories don't get much better than this. You will immediately find yourself caring for both of the main characters. The heat builds up at a slow and steady pace. You should stop reading this review and start reading the actual story. You will not be disappointed. (10/10)
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Aug 7, 2005 |
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This was excellent. I hope to see more stories along this vein. (10/10)
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Aug 7, 2005 |
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Absolutely brilliant. I loved Mika and Eve's awkwardness towards each other at the start, and I thought the plot and ideas were excellent. I anxiously await the next one! (10/10)
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Guiller
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Aug 7, 2005 |
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Love it, i like your rithm and narrative also, is tender and not violent, is simply romantic and i liked it very much (10/10)
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CrazyMe
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Aug 6, 2005 |
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Brilliant. Well written and very cute. Belivable characters as well. The slave-laws were quite unrealistic (no white country has accepted white slaves since early Middle Ages and I doubt it will ever happen again) but it was described in an excellent manner. Not too technical, but still gave the readers enough info.
I hope more in this kind of style will follow. (10/10)
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Stephen Miletus
(Edit) (Jan 7, 2012)
- Uh, do a Google search on "indentured servants", & you'll see just how wrong you are. Other practices include the methods used for recruiting sailors for civilian & naval vessels, AKA "shanghaiing" or "press gangs", & the quaint custom practiced by some German nobility of their selling male subjects of the appropriate ages to foreign military powers to serve as soldiers. Involuntary servitude in "white countries" existed in one form or another into the early 20th century -- although some believe prostitution as practiced in the US & Western Europe is yet another form of involuntary servitude.
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meanoldman43
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Aug 6, 2005 |
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I think I liked it because it was differentConfusion, tenderness, eroticism. Different than what I've read here before. I liked the main character's confusion. (9/10)
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