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Why Now
Author: debbie Bruce
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(Added on Aug 6, 2005)
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Its women is to chapive by her high school crush. Fifteen years later. He did even know who she was back then. So she thought. |
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Average (?):  (3.5/10) |
Average
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
rce
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Aug 7, 2005 |
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The story is quite OK, though not unique in any way. The language is horrible. The pace in the story telling is too fast, try to let the suspense take its time the next time you write a story. (3/10)
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mkemse
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Aug 6, 2005 |
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the story was ok at best, but the english was terrible you need ot have it proof read if you do not speak english, if you do, you might want to consider another hobby. The 4 i gave was for the story, the english was a 1 at best (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
Rocky
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Aug 6, 2005 |
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My, God...do you even speak English? If not, I suggest you find a proofreader who does. If English is your native language, however, I suggest you take the most basic writing class available. One of the worst examples of writing I have seen here. (2/10)
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