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Karmal's Saga
Author: Fantazmaster
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(Added on Aug 6, 2005)
(This month 76547 readers) (Total 103445 readers) |
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Karmal escapes from a hacienda in Mexico run by a slave owner who subjects Karmal to extremely hard labor along with using her as a painslave.Her escape leads her to landing a job with a large corporation that has its headquarters on a large Carribean Island where she is sent for job training.Here she finds out rather suddenly that her new employer has other things in mind for her.A big thanks to Karmal,whose past experiences inspired this story |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
tainted Angel
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Jan 5, 2007 |
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WOW intense story there, Talk about bad luck LOL
I was cringing along with her to the sentancing LOL Gives a lot to play with in the future (no pun intended) (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
LordVetinari
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Aug 21, 2005 |
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I liked many of the ideas herein. I am looking forward to future chapters. I would have liked to have given it a higher rating, but the frequent spelling, grammar, and punctuation errors kept me from being able to do so. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Aug 20, 2005 |
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something different (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
MistressHormones
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Aug 13, 2005 |
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Very imaginative. Improves with each chapter. Keep up the good work! (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
balorlv
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Aug 11, 2005 |
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This story needs to be proof read and edited to get a higher rating. The story line is ok but it needs to be developed. There isn't much erotic content, maybe that comes later in the story. With some work and effort it could be a good story. (5/10)
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