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Big Boy
Author: pr_squared
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(Added on Aug 2, 2005)
(This month 65844 readers) (Total 84815 readers) |
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Zack, a tackle on the state football team, dreams of getting between Beth's shapely thighs. He gets more than he bargained. A ponyboy story |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
cambridge
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Aug 11, 2005 |
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A great ponyboy story! The only quibble is a continuity problem near the end between the hacking segment and the race. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
pr_squared
(Edit) (Aug 12, 2005)
- THanks for your comment. I've tried to work in Ashley's return several ways. I struggled with graphic sex versus sexual tension.
pr_squared
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| Reviewer:
lex ludite
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Aug 11, 2005 |
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Speaking from the male perspective, this is one of the more depressing stories I've read in a very long time. On the other hand it is brilliantly written, a true horror story. My compliments to the author for producing such superb material. Unfortunately me thinks you are casting pearls before swine, not a good habit to get into when you display this kind of talent. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
bloodlineS
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Aug 5, 2005 |
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Sorry, but cuffs wouldn't work.. they'd just slip straight off .. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
rebelfan1
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Aug 4, 2005 |
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Can tell you put a lot of effort into writing this....Nice job (9/10)
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