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Group XS
Author: Saavik
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(Added on Jul 30, 2005)
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Catherine is a public prosecutor who thought she'd quashed the sadistic Group XS. Then her friends and family start disappearing and the spectre of her past comes back to haunt and ensnare her. |
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TinTin Quaretino
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Apr 4, 2010 |
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Great story and creative scenes. I don't quite understand the ins and outs of why you won't add any more chapters but i hope you find a way of getting them up somewhere. The torture that Catherine is going through seems quite tame compared to the torture that us readers are having to endure by not being able to read the continuation.....
It seems that this story is now on http://www.rppstories.com, with Dr Saavik posting in the forum area. Unfortunately, it seems that you have to pay to access the members area and I'm only willing to pay if I know the story has progressed a lot further. (9/10)
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Jytte
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Jan 26, 2009 |
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One of the best stories I ever have read (10/10)
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MISTRESS H
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Oct 27, 2007 |
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After reading the whole story, I found that is became somewhat predictable. But also found that you led us to the point of watching Lynn become to know her darker side, but at the same time gave us a hint that the Dr's hypnotic suggestion was not as strong as he thought. Also would have liked to see, Catherine start the thought process of getting free, and finding Lynn, and both women exact some revenge on members of the Group. (9/10)
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andytecg
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Mar 17, 2007 |
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This has been the greatest BDSM story I've ever read. The scenes are compelling and the plot is dramatic. I'm just sorry we won't get to see its conclusion. (1/10)
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Dec 23, 2006 |
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The story is exquisite - surely the finest writing I've seen in a long time. When I found the story had been uploaded here, in a longer form than I'd seen before on Thndrshark's site, I'm sure I felt as strongly as Catherine did - now, almost as eager as she is to move to the next stage after her bucket!
I'm very sorry to see the way the site has been going, between new hare-brained "policy" and daft bugs being introduced into the PHP code which drives it (all the stray backslash characters, from botched string-escaping!) - Dr Saavik, I do hope you find somewhere to upload future chapters, and let us all know! (10/10)
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Dec 19, 2006 |
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This is certainly the best story I've read. The plot is very imaginative and the scenarios are not the usual stuff. It definitely stands out from the crowd of stories that are out there. It is therefore a pity that this story won't be continued. I would love to see the end and hope you will write more DrSaavik. Perhaps you will publish it somewhere else.
Although the story ist absolutely worth reading I only rate it 01/10 by request of it's author.
A sad fan
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Kira
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Oct 22, 2006 |
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Also from me a 10+ for the story, would be nice if we could see an continuing somethere, please let us know. (1/10)
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static-true
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Oct 2, 2006 |
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such a shame. I'm disgusted it has come to this. now we will never know the ending to probably the best bdsm story ever written. under normal circumtances i'd give 11/10 if it were possible. but at saavik's own request, I shall play my part to get its rating lowered. I only hope this story is finished and published somewhere. (1/10)
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GwaiLo
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Aug 19, 2006 |
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Wish I could give this the rating it really deserves, absolutely one of the best stories on the site. Would love to see you write more DrSaavik and if you ever do continue to write this story here or elsewhere, I'll continue to be a huge fan. (1/10)
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stratus
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May 5, 2006 |
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I've just recently registered here, but have been an avid reader for a little over a year now. This has to be the best story I have ever read before and I am EXTREMELY sad that things turned out the way they did. I was really hoping for more but I guess I will just have to use my own imagination to finish it. A sad ending to a great story. (1/10)
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yamesh
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Apr 25, 2006 |
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I would have to disagree with the stance you are taking Dr. Saavik...you are punishing your readers. Why not simply provide the information Rabbit asked for and let it go? Change is inevitable and I'm sure he didn't single you out when he banned accounts. I'm sure there was a differant way that could have been done, but that is past now. Great story. (10/10)
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lord_odie
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Apr 15, 2006 |
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Great story, bad managment. As per request, 1/10 (although, of course 10/10) (1/10)
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Apr 8, 2006 |
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I rate this site a 1. Such a shame, it used to be really a nice place before the new management took over. The good doctor deserves better, as indeed do all writer/contributors, whatever their standard.
You can't (or should I say can't) even fix this thing with the in the titles!
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Apr 7, 2006 |
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Just found this forum after being a fan of saavik for a while and can't believe the situation. Great, imaginative writing that's among the best I've read. Per the Dr's request, i rate this a "1." (1/10)
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Mar 31, 2006 |
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I want to ask what kind of site would not respect the wishes of an author and remove his/her work.
I ask too what kind of site dont give that authors at least the respect they deserve, more considering they give their time and work for free and only ask for our support and comments.
PS. Really a sad day for all who love your storys, i really hope you find somewhere else where you can continue them. (1/10)
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Mar 30, 2006 |
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I'm really sorry about the way this site has developed. It used to be a very good site. True to the original virtues of the net. Now its merely another commercial site.
Its a site that does not respect the people who contribute, i.e. the authors of the stories. After all it is the authors who put content into this site.
The author of this story wishes it to be pulled. Any decent site would respect that wish. The sad irony is, of course, that if the site were decent Dr. Saavik probably would not wish the story to be pulled.
Goodbye to BDSMLibrary. (1/10)
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yourtruie
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Mar 30, 2006 |
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Thank you very much Doctor for this story. I really love the way Catherine is forced to behave now. It's one of the best story i ever read.
nathalie
PS: edited to meet author's wish (1/10)
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Mar 28, 2006 |
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As requested by author (1/10)
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Mar 27, 2006 |
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It is a real shame that such a good story should be ruined by BDSMlibrary.
I had an email from DrSaavik today and he is adamant that he will not post anything more anywhere on the web while this story is still on BdsmLibrary.
Thanks Rabbit1 and all the good people of BdsmLibrary, you've probably lost us the best BDSM author of his age, and certainly the most popular author on the site.
Bravo!
Good move guys, you certainly have things under control!
My review rating is based on Dr Saavik's request. I would give the story 10/10, but Dr Saavik has said he wants the story to disappear into obscurity on BdsmLibrary.
Who am I to disagree? (1/10)
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Barron
(Edit) (Mar 28, 2006)
- Absolutly agree with the above. What a waste! An author of this quality is very rare and now no one will be able to enjoy his work again.
Thanks BDSM
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Incomguy
(Edit) (Mar 31, 2006)
- I can't agree more. How arrogant can you be to kick someone who give you something and ask nothing in return?
At least i hope they have at least some decent yet and remove his work as requested, but seen the kindof people that manage this site now i dont have much hope.
Shame on ALL of you BDSMlibrary staff.
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Guess the author believe himself better than the rest of the forum members---the rule was made last november and everyone was given a grace period to comply with the DOB in the profile rule ---now the grace period has ended ---all members who did not comply have been banned ---but all they have to do to get their access back is supply me with a complete date of birth --and I can edit their profile and give access back
this was to protect the owner---it is this or credit card verification and the owner chose this way to keep the site free (4/10)
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Mothbrad
(Edit) (Mar 27, 2006)
- This might have been true, Rabbit1, except that Saavik never read the forum - the first he knew about the 'problem' was when he got a message saying, effectively, "banned for no reason forever." Not much of a way to treat the writer who produced the most successful story that this site has ever had (if you look at the overall rating of 10/10 - no other story with that rating has as many votes ... a fair way to judge, IMO). A sad end to a once great site ...
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Incomguy
(Edit) (Mar 31, 2006)
- Great job rabbit1, you just quick the best author you had out of this site.
At least you can do as he ask and remove his work, or he can't ask that eather? If so... well its better if i dont say anything of what im thinking of this site right now.
And for what he believe about himself i can't tell but can I ask who do YOU think are more important here, the authors or you?
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caged
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Mar 25, 2006 |
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Wow, can a site do that? Leave a story up despite it's author requesting its removal? Having not submitted a story, I don't know what the 'terms and conditions' are, but it seems a little unreasonable. The story still gets 10/10 of course. (10/10)
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DrSaavik2
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Mar 25, 2006 |
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This story is now ended on BDSMlibrary.
I wanted to have the story taken off but, so I'm told, "It is not the new owner's policy."
Why do I want it taken off? Because the new owners don't seem either to care about the authors' wishes or treat them with any civility.
BDSMlibrary may see this as a knee jerk reaction to being told I was banned for life when I tried to reply to my wife's review. Partially it is because I now understand I was barred for not filling in my birth date. A message to this effect would have been nice. A reply to my emails querying the ban would have been nice.
My action in wanting the story to be pulled is, however, more considered than just that knee jerk.
Since the new ownership, every question, every comment has met with a stone wall response of "the new owner's policy..."
It would have been nice to have treated with a bit of gratitude for writing a story which seemed to be popular, instead I was told that I should be grateful for a free forum for my writing.
OK guys, then thanks for the opportunity...
As to the readers, particularly those who have taken the time to write to me and/or review the story - thanks; all your comments and support were much appreciated.
I will continue the story but, I suspect, not for general publication. I will, however, make sure that those who have made contact and reviewed the story find out which of the characters Mistress XS is and what happens to Catherine!
My experience here has taught me that putting your story on the web is one thing - dealing with people who won't then take it down is another.
(1/10)
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mrssaavik
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Mar 22, 2006 |
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But then I am biased............and sore! (10/10)
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Mar 1, 2006 |
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I am so glad to see another chaper of the best story on the site put up. As always left wanting more. Dr loved ch 28 I can see them cuming around the bened know. I can't want to see what Mistress Severity has in store for Catherine. Outstanding work Dr and thank you very much (10/10)
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Feb 22, 2006 |
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This ranks among the very best series I've read. Well-written, vivid imagery, and a story that keeps one interested....and waiting for the next installment.
Please keep up the good work! (10/10)
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tinglee
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Feb 16, 2006 |
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Wonderful beginning, can't wait for more, the story is well crafted and and the bondage descriptions easy to follow.More please. (10/10)
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DrSaavik
(Edit) (Aug 26, 2005)
- Thank you.
There is more now up and more coming, so keep watching!
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Feb 16, 2006 |
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I am sorry it took so long to review this story, (I was thinking I had.) This is a great story, and I was ever so happy to see a new chapter! (10/10)
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Saavik has a great imagination for strict, painful bondage and a very readable writing style. (10/10)
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If you are going to read only a storie this year, you have fount it. Group XS have it all. It's well written and well timed; with fantastic characters and a very good sense of timming.
So what are you doing reading this instead of the storie itself?
Do it. You'll never regret. (10/10)
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Oct 26, 2005 |
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One of the best I ever had read (10/10)
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Oct 12, 2005 |
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The black fantasy of DrSaavik is fabulous. On one side there is the physical torturing of all the victims and on the other side the mental struggling of Catherine, who is forced in self inflicted torture and to see her professional world crumbling. (10/10)
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It feels almost pointless adding to the fulsome praise that Saavik has justifiably received for this epic, but I'll do it anyway.
The torments, tortures and cruelties are incessant and extraordinarily creative. You constantly think he can't possibly come with anything new or more diabolical, only to find yourself stiffening at the next sadistic scenario.
Two thing impress me most. First, that there is no repetitive fetish that results in the reader knowing what to expect after a while. The only predictable factor is more cruelty, more suffering and more inventiveness. Secondly, there is barely a wasted word. I'm sure I am not the only bdsmlibrary reader who ends up scrolling through many stories, impatient for the paydirt, but I find myself reading every word of 'Group XS'.
Bravo, Saavik! (10/10)
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Great series. Cruel and imaginative, evil and inventive (redundant, but the author deserves a double ration of compliments). The story is highly addictive and allows endless developments, opening doors to various themes. BRAVO ! Encore !
Simply love it. (10/10)
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Love it! The tortures are just so evil and well thought out.
Can't wait to see Elissa's grueling ponygirl exercises! Love stories about women having to run and work when their plugged and chained...
Perhaps some enema torture would work well too? (10/10)
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This must be the best story I have read. Let's have more and more!!!Thank you for it.|'ve added this bit later. The story and quality of writing get better every day and the delicious inventiveness too. So thank you again and may the story run a long long time . Gerda (10/10)
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What a delicious way to spend an afternoon! Saavik, you have a wonderful knack for setting up a scene to appear to be gentle and soothing only to add a modification and turn the scene truly sadistic. WOW! I have been writing for a few years now and am fascinated by your torments and the dichotomy between the gentleness of Catherine and her lover and then the horror that befalls them both from their curiosity about the gear they "borrow" from the group. Truly, curiosity killed the cat in this story. Thank you for a top notch story and for some very devious and delicious new ideas for me and my lady. :D Keep the decadence and torments coming! (10/10)
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Outstanding story! Your descriptions of the tortures are delicious! I liked the contrast of the light BDSM play between Catherine and Lynne, to the brutal torture of Becky. By all means, please continue.
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I just finished part 24 (and all that goes before it) and the story continues to be excellent. I especially like the "consensual" aspect with Catherine agreeing to horrible punishments to save her friend. Please continue.
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DrSaavik
(Edit) (Aug 26, 2005)
- Thanks for a good review - it does make a difference to have feedback, whether by review or email.
I hope you're finding the same contrasts as the story develops; I'm trying to mix heavy and lighter scenario.
Again, I'm happy to receive suggestions.
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Have enjoyed this style of story for many years and this is one of the best. The story flows and the story line keeps developing. I hope there are many more chapters. I wonder if the doctor is registered for medical rebates. 10/10 (10/10)
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THE DOCTOR OBVIOUSLY NEVER READ THE FIRST LINE OF THE HIPPOCRATIC OATH; "FIRST DO NO HARM'.SAAVIK(SOUNDS LIKE 'SAVAGE' DOESNT IT) TRULY IS A TORMENTOR. HE KEEPS ME CONSTANTLY AROUSED AND KNOWS BREAST ABUSE TECHNICALLY AND INTIMATELY. DR. SAAVIK ENCOURAGES ME TO PURSUE MORE OF THE BREAST PUNISHMENT I LOVE IN THE REALITY OF MY LIFE AND MY FANTASIES AS WELL. I HAVE FOUND NO MORE PROFOUND AUTHOR IN HIS GENRE. HE IS SO 'KNOWING' I SUSPECT HE OPERATES WITHOUT A THESAURUS AT HAND AND I CAN ONLY IMAGINE WHAT IT WOULD BE LIKE TO BE A TIT SLUT IN HIS CLUTCHES. I WOULD ALLOW HIM TO VISIT HIS MONSTROUS PERVERSIONS ON MY BODY IN THE SNAP OF FINGERS. (10/10)
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DrSaavik
(Edit) (Sep 8, 2005)
- Thank you for your comments Elissa.
I realise I've been remiss in writing replies and will start going through and answering all as I do with emails.
Firstly, let me say "Hippocratic Oath?" Unheard of in Dr Saavik and his cohorts' vocabulary I'm afraid!
And, yes, you are right (and the first person to spot it) Saavik does mean savage in one of the East European languages, which is where I picked the name up: not from Star Trek!
All I can say is your review is gratifying, I don't use a thesaurus and Mrs Saavik is best placed to tell you about the reality! It doesn't go as far as the fantasy but there is a certain amount of practical experience in my writings.
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this one is REALLY an s&m story, beautifully written and well worth the time to read it all (10/10)
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The writer has a positive gift for sadistic cruelty. I will be watching for future offerings with eager anticipation. (10/10)
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Twisted and painful. And that is just the reading of it. Saavik manages the sort of cruelty that only a few authors can manage. Not exactly my type of story - his type of torture not being to my personal tastes. Still, it is well written, clear and flows quite well. If one enjoys brutal erotica this is a keeper. (9/10)
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Just to follow up that email. I thought that the changes are made the story even better. Added a lot more depth to the characters. Can't wait for the next set of chapters. (10/10)
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Well and truly one of the greatest of writers on the scene at the moment - especially exciting as he is still active, and working on the extreme fringes. Recommended for anybody who likes extreme female torture stories. I could say much more, but I'd rather you read the story itself than my review. (10/10)
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Dark and evil characters contrasted with innocent victims; well written and properly paced.
Looking forward to more chapters. (10/10)
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I enjoyed reading this story He keeps wanting to know what will happen in the next chapter (9/10)
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Great. The most impressing of this story is, that it could be real. All descriptions are very clear and the settings could be somewhere around in your neighbourhood. Not that foggy or fictious like a lot of other writings are.
We like this kind of "reality show". Keep on writing.
King and his cat (Germany) (10/10)
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DrSaavik
(Edit) (Aug 26, 2005)
- Thanks for the review King & Cat and for taking the time to email me; I hope you are not disappointed with the way the story has gone so far.
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very good and well written. can't wait for more (10/10)
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DrSaavik
(Edit) (Aug 26, 2005)
- Thanks sboy - there's more now and more to come.
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This story was very well written. Cudos!!! I got a little confused with it going back and forth but ... that was probably just me!! I am looking forward to the next chapters. (9/10)
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DrSaavik
(Edit) (Aug 26, 2005)
- Thanks heycarrieanne.
I hope that the story is beginning to make some sense now; the latest chapter should go a long way to explaining what the sudden 'volte face' into the Nazi era was about at the beginning.
It may not seem it, but there is a direction the story is going and the reason for all these stray bits will become clear by the end!
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Very, very arousing... Dr Saavik sure has the right touch, and a way with words!!! Especially the elecrotorture of Becky was really something... A most inspiring story. If you wish to share story ideas, please feel free to send me an e-mail! elesado@hotmail.com (10/10)
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DrSaavik
(Edit) (Aug 26, 2005)
- Thank you Electrosadist.
We have since been in touch via email and, if you watch some of the coming chapters, a number of your idea have been incorporated in the story.
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Very enjoyable story, hope to see more of haughty bitches getting painfully re-tooled.
"Roof" (9/10)
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DrSaavik
(Edit) (Aug 26, 2005)
- Many thanks Roof.
Sorry it has taken so long for me to start replying to revies - 'life and art' I'm afraid!
I hope you're enjoying the newer chapters, and do please email any suggestions!
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It was the best!!! Saavik does a awesome job with his stories cannot wait for more..thank you (10/10)
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DrSaavik
(Edit) (Aug 26, 2005)
- Thanks chrissy, there's more coming and I'm pleased you enjoy what I write.
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To all readers in BDSM Library: Consider yourselves blessed! Dr. Saavik is a unique writer. I've had the good fortune to read a few of his stories. I'm an avid reader and i can tell you, they simply don't come any better than Group XS. I don't know for certain, but i'm pretty sure that Dr. Saavik is an experienced writer, and, fortunately, with a taste for excesse. I will check BDSM Library everyday for the continuation of this story. If you're really lucky Dr. Saavik may post his other stories here. (10/10)
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DrSaavik
(Edit) (Aug 26, 2005)
- Thank you.
For those people who want to know how snogg34 has read some of my other stories, he contacted me when an early version of this story went onto thndrshark.com.
I won't comment on the experienced writer bit - I'm allowed my anonymity! - but suffice to say I enjoy writing and there's plenty more in the archive if people would like it.
As to checking BDSMlibrary; please do so, the story is almost complete and I will regularly release chapters.
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Dr Saavik has the ability to make me feel everything that Catherine is going thru. I am so amazed at his writings. Wonderful (10/10)
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DrSaavik
(Edit) (Aug 26, 2005)
- Thank you for your review.
It's nice to know that people enjoy my writing.
I hope you are experiencing Catherine's feelings in a good way, and please email me if you have any suggestions which you feel would add to the spice of the story.
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Fabulous story. I get the feeling that I'm reading a proper novel, with twists and turn coming at me from the opening chapters.
Love the cruel sadism.
Please keep the chapters coming! (10/10)
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DrSaavik
(Edit) (Aug 26, 2005)
- Thank you Magus.
(Is that Magus as in John Fowles and 'The Collector' btw? If anyone wants to read a truly good book, read the second edition of 'The Magus.')
There is plenty more coming - the story is largely written and the time is now in proof reading and editing.
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this is one of the best i have read in a while, good job (9/10)
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DrSaavik
(Edit) (Jul 31, 2005)
- Thanks mkemse.
It's nice to know that my wickedly twisted and sadistic mind is appreciated!
Regards, Saavik
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Jul 30, 2005 |
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Love the torture. How sadistically wicked. I want more. I love the way the tortured girl was restrained. Keep the chapters cumming. (10/10)
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DrSaavik
(Edit) (Jul 31, 2005)
- Thanks for your comments Romy.
There is more, I promise!
Regards, Saavik
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I'm sure that several published authors would like their story to be as imaginative as this one is. So the rating of 10 is a bit low for this story.
First of all i like the story. I like the picture clear descriptions (like the schoolgirl dress for Charlotte), and i love the promises. There are so many directions this story can go, and yet it seems there is a logic to the story. I look forward to the coming chapters! (10/10)
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DrSaavik
(Edit) (Jul 31, 2005)
- Thanks for the encouragement addict; your generous praise is much appreciated.
Suffice to say, I hope you won't be disappointed. There is much more to come and plenty of new threads, twists and turns in store; but there is a purpose to these which will become clear (even to poor Catherine) by the end!
Regards, Saavik
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